tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post2967711441500288896..comments2024-02-11T01:31:08.910-07:00Comments on Animal Jam Spirit Blog: Rare Ninja MaskSnowyclaw Jamaahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12041219578141483080noreply@blogger.comBlogger183125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-1906962293448660192013-04-01T23:10:01.703-06:002013-04-01T23:10:01.703-06:00He decided that (nearly) all the alphas would ask ...He decided that (nearly) all the alphas would ask the phantoms for a time to repair the damage the phantoms had caused, and resume the fighting later.<br />While the phantoms were distracted, Graham and Greely -- the best alphas at sneaking and gadgets engineering -- would creep onto the ship and wreck something important in the ship, the Darkness. The Phantoms would hopefully abandon ship and leave the Alphas to drown with the ship -- not suspecting Graham and Greely setting things right once the phantoms had gone. The plan proved successful, and the Alphas soon had control of the Darkness. They battled with the Phantoms once again, only even though they had the winning ship, they were losing again. Peck couldn't bear this, so she siezed her chance with both paws. She grabbed the wheel of the ship and drove it into the side of the Jamaa Spirit, breaking the hull of both ships open as she did so. (the hull is the almondy-shaped bit that rests on the water)<br />The Alphas made a raft from the driftwood that was once a phantom ship. Nothing had survived of the Darkness, save this raft. And the other ship...<br />Liza looked out to see the silhouette of the Jamaa Spirit sinking into the depths of Kani Kove, the phantoms' mark on the back clearly visible. A tear came into her eye. "There goes our history.." she said, her voice shaky. Peck hopped up. "We're Jamaasians. We're animals that remember." she said confidently.<br />(I hope nobody minds me quoting Snowy.)<br />The phantoms also made a raft from their ship's driftwood, and they managed to hide in the Temple of Zios, away from prying Alpha eyes, guarding the most important of the Jamaasian artifacts, whithout which, Jamaasian history would fade away, and the phantoms would materialize in it's place, all over Jamaa.<br />We must hold the phantoms back.<br />We must remember.<br /><br />What do you think of it? Plz comment!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-73610719972936793212013-04-01T22:34:13.699-06:002013-04-01T22:34:13.699-06:00OKAY. Here I go.
A long time ago, before even the...OKAY. Here I go.<br /><br />A long time ago, before even the Beta times, when Jamaa was still being created, Mira had just picked out the Alphas from the animals. Their first act as a group was to build a ship -- a wonderful ship, and they named it the Jamaa Spirit. The Jamaa Spirit was the strongest, biggest ship to sail the seven seas. It had ten inches of the strongest wood for walls instead of five inches, ten cannons per side instead of seven, and thanks to Graham, there weren't any oars or sails, just an engine down below that neve developed a fault. The Jamaa Spirit held records of Jamaa's history, rooms upon rooms with books and artifacts, including Peck's silver brush, (I hope you don't mind, sheep908821), as well as many spare rooms for history to come -- future battles, victories to come, and future enemies -- the phantoms.<br />The phantoms had only just appeared in the land. They decided that if the Jamaasians have a mega ship, why can't they? So they built their own ship -- just as big and tough as the Jamaa Spirit, only with none of the history - the phantoms were too dark to see any of that. They only cared about causing misery, the only emotion they feel is hate.<br />The phantoms hated the Jamaasians and the Alphas so much, that they immediately went into battle. The reward for finding the wildlife in Kani Kove -- the battleground -- is a miniature replica of the hideous battle that followed.<br />The phantoms eventually took over the Jamaa Spirit, and made their mark in the back, assuming they would become permanent in Jamaa's history, always there to cause misery to the Jamaasians. But they hadn't counted on Sir Gilbert, the strategist.<br />He came up with a plan the phantoms wouldn't have a clue of.<br /><br />TBCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-77127813058264658402013-04-01T22:18:12.299-06:002013-04-01T22:18:12.299-06:00People might hate... okay, hate's a strong wor...People might hate... okay, hate's a strong word... people might not like you if you express your opinion like that. Sure, they might be flybrained, and sure, might be right. Yes, that's your opinion. but please be a bit more respectful when expressing it!!!<br /><br />-Lil01 (look me up. Real person.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-10912562510992933592013-04-01T01:46:38.452-06:002013-04-01T01:46:38.452-06:00Okay, okay, I'm sorry, didn't mean to be o...Okay, okay, I'm sorry, didn't mean to be offensive. you could have just said 'they had to take the boats back' instead of 'they could take the boats back or crash into an island'. Then mean people like me wouldn't do mean comments like the one above. sorry anyway.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-35379032089957839152013-04-01T01:45:27.001-06:002013-04-01T01:45:27.001-06:00Sir, there's a terrible storm. We can either t...Sir, there's a terrible storm. We can either take the smaller boats back to the dock, or crash into a small island. I recommend crashing into a small island.LolsXD<br />Why did I do that?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-27317434577469994512013-04-01T01:40:29.448-06:002013-04-01T01:40:29.448-06:00You should ask Snowy to post that like on a separa...You should ask Snowy to post that like on a separate link!!!<br />Where DID you learn to write like that?<br />I like the part where Peck was 'drowning' in the shallows though. XD<br /><br />AND I COMPLETELY AGREE WITH ANONYMOUS ABOVE ME!!!<br />I LOVE THAT story!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-44776545104165723752013-03-31T11:55:20.455-06:002013-03-31T11:55:20.455-06:00Rare Lion Hat was HIDEOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Rare Lion Hat was HIDEOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Asterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16769504847325603584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-78823576244529609492013-03-22T17:30:37.745-06:002013-03-22T17:30:37.745-06:00A-ha! Caught you red-handed, sheep90882! >:)
An...A-ha! Caught you red-handed, sheep90882! >:)<br />Anyone else notice something a little FISHY about the comments to her story? <br />-They're all anonymous comments! The means anyone could have wrote them, including the author trying (and failing) to cover up fake complements. <br />-Even more proof: Notice the first reply is only 1 minute from the last part of the story. The next one is 2 minutes from the first reply, the 3rd is a minute from the 2nd, and so on. Get my point? They were all posted between 30-38 minutes, each about a minute apart. Duh! Fake!<br />...Replying on your own story so that people like me reading the comments will think other people like your story! Ha! That's plain out-right ridiculous! <br />It's obvious you didn't put much effort into your feeble attempts of making others think others like your story. Sure, it was good, I can say that, but THIS? No, not good, not good at all. Flybrained, if you ask me. I hope you read this comment.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-67854164371537445272013-03-22T04:20:54.130-06:002013-03-22T04:20:54.130-06:00OMGOSH your story is so awesome!!!! Where's ya...OMGOSH your story is so awesome!!!! Where's ya learn the write like that????? No offence to anybody else, but this is the best story EVER!! Definely a winner!!! :D :D :D :D :D I loved the part when the Alphas got catupulted to the ship Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-59040963819509575512013-03-21T19:38:34.997-06:002013-03-21T19:38:34.997-06:00I hope Peck gets the day of peaceI hope Peck gets the day of peaceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-40240783380002426992013-03-21T19:37:14.218-06:002013-03-21T19:37:14.218-06:00Hmmph! This story is action-packed and fun!Hmmph! This story is action-packed and fun!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-45622849194441836082013-03-21T19:35:49.286-06:002013-03-21T19:35:49.286-06:00Me to! I'm sheep 90882's number 1 fan!Me to! I'm sheep 90882's number 1 fan!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-55641278065168477512013-03-21T19:34:32.664-06:002013-03-21T19:34:32.664-06:00I wanna write a story just as good!I wanna write a story just as good!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-33763501068947661232013-03-21T19:33:11.342-06:002013-03-21T19:33:11.342-06:00Yea, I know, right? This ought to be the read-alou...Yea, I know, right? This ought to be the read-aloud story thing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-63665288679159127042013-03-21T19:31:55.035-06:002013-03-21T19:31:55.035-06:00This is The best story eva!
-randomanonymouspe...This is The best story eva! <br /><br /> -randomanonymousperson Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-24078786342322234462013-03-21T19:30:40.175-06:002013-03-21T19:30:40.175-06:00Peck hopped to the weapon cabin. Gulping air, she ... Peck hopped to the weapon cabin. Gulping air, she furiously searched in the "very important weapon" pile. "Hmm! Graham's toolbox, Liza's staff, Cosmo's first-aid kit, Sophia's lasso.... And aha!" Peck gasped. She held up a silver paintbrush. "A very trusty weapon for a very artistic rabbit!" Peck boasted. She dipped her rare paintbrush into a vat of pink paint and pressed a hidden button. Crimson-colored paint bursted out. "Mmh, it darkened over the years but who cares!" she mumbled. Without hesitating, Peck leaped out of the cabin.<br /><br /> "Fight, you cowards! Fight!" Commander Phantom demanded. Several warriors and generals hoisted shadow bombs into the cannons. Shadow bombs were powerful bombs that exploded into darkness, ash, and acid. General Phantom struck a match and lit the cannon. Bang! Boom! Splash! The cannon fell into empty water. The two ships floated closer than before. Commander Phantom choked back the horror. It was the alphas! "Uh! Not YOU creatures again!" he scoffed. "Well, you are a creature!" came a soft bellow. To the alphas' astonishment, it was little Peck cursing the phantoms!<br /><br /> "Stop it Peck, you'll get hurt!" Marco warned. He waddled cautiously to the starboard (which is, by the way, the ship's right side) and looked at Peck with worried eyes. "Enough of this goodbye talk! Fire at that stupid rodent!" Commander commanded. Peck was infuriated. How dare that phantom called her a "stupid rodent!" A shadow bomb raced towards Peck. But it was too late. Poor Peck was knocked off the starboard. Her eyes were still and her body was badly wounded. A giant wave drenched the ship. Peck's body plunged helplessly into the deep cove. <br /><br /><br /> Harper and Marco dove into the water. They saw a little silhouette sinking into the trench. "She's drowning! Hurry!" Harper barked. The two saw a bomb enter the water in an amazing speed and noise. They dodged and thrashed wildly in the current. "Peck! We need to save her!" Marco coughed. Soon, Peck was visible. She was carried by the water alphas to the surface. She was hauled on to the deck. Her eyes fluttered open, but they were dull, like clouds in the distance.<br /><br /> A mixture of herbs and medicine poured into Peck's mouth. She gasped and blinked a few times. Her paws were bandaged and her bruises were treated. Cosmo smiled and told her that the war was getting worse. By her side, the tired bodies of Ruby, Greely, and Liza stared into the sky. Peck stood up. She was ready to challenge the phantoms.<br /><br /> "Fight if you can, you meanies!" Peck stuck her tongue out at the rival ship. "Well, if it isn't "Peckerina" the injured rodent!" General teased. Phantoms aimed crossbows at her. Peck, unafraid to fight, pointed her silver paintbrush at the phantoms. She had mixed her paint with sharp debris and lightning powder, a natural substance with a big shock. "Ha! With that thing? What are you going to do with it? Throw it?" a phantom laughed. Peck pressed the button and paint hurled at the whole ship. Lightning powder unleashed its power and made the ship explode. Peck stared at the ship, but it sank like a rock.<br /><br /> In the horizon, the sun had set. Peck was granted a wish, and she received a platinum (white gold) paintbrush. Her silver brush is on display at the museum. During the sunset, a little bird flew across the scene. "A dove! Peck gasped. "Tomorrow will be a day of peace." <br /><br /><br /><br /> -The End- <br /><br /> Comment and subscribe!<br /> <br /> ~sheep90882Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-19117774071119839842013-03-20T19:51:41.349-06:002013-03-20T19:51:41.349-06:00Here I go! I might have to stop if I run out of ti... Here I go! I might have to stop if I run out of time.<br /><br /> Many years ago, phantoms terrorized the seas like little pirates. They robbed many ships, but animals would fight them, just like our loyal alphas would. Sometimes, it would lead to broken masses, or worse, shipwrecks. This is the story, of the most famous wreck in the phantom history. <br /><br /> "Hurry up, my little servants. The animals won't suspect us until sundown. Just think of their " poor " little faces when they see us!" King Phantom boomed. Grunting, the little phantoms hauled cannons on to the ship. Bright black flags flew in the wind. The ship was painted in a frightening shade of brown. The ship, also known as the Sea Serpent, was docked in the cold harbor. After the phantom warriors climbed on, King Phantom proudly lifted the anchor and wished them good luck. The Sea Serpent floated away, powered by a cold wind.<br /><br /> After many days at sea, a happy screech called from the crow's nest." Land Ho!" a phantom cried. Warriors grabbed each other and trot-danced happily on the deck. "Don't celebrate so soon," the commander remarked. "We still have that ship to defeat." He pointed at the horizon and gestured with his tentacles when a ship emerged from the fog.<br /><br /> "Are we there yet?" Peck moaned for the hundredth time on the patrol. "Once you stop groaning, the exciting part will come. I can see a figure in the seas!" Sir Gilbert rasped. Peck put her paw near her mouth and stared innocently into the tiger's emerald eyes." Oh look," Amelia murmured. "A day at sea does one's good!" LaSalle, the raccoon alpha squeaked." But what exactly IS that thing?" Greely pondered. "Fire!" a shrill voice called out. The cannons aimed towards the animals. "Phantoms! We are under attack!" Liza shouted. <br /><br /><br /> Ok I'm running outta time. I'll write soon! ~sheep90882 <br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-14476309300297443242013-03-19T18:25:06.137-06:002013-03-19T18:25:06.137-06:00Mine had a few spelling errors! Sorry about that.....Mine had a few spelling errors! Sorry about that.. I love self correct... I love self correct.... Arctic33https://www.blogger.com/profile/04317853095195622889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-72291013165602726372013-03-19T07:02:06.688-06:002013-03-19T07:02:06.688-06:00Wow people are writing whole novels over here. XDWow people are writing whole novels over here. XDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-29223670559175166142013-03-18T22:49:17.949-06:002013-03-18T22:49:17.949-06:00Age... What is wrong with my spelling lolAge... What is wrong with my spelling lolArctic33https://www.blogger.com/profile/04317853095195622889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-15290551688865836342013-03-18T22:48:17.538-06:002013-03-18T22:48:17.538-06:00I always lie about my again stuff like that......I always lie about my again stuff like that......Arctic33https://www.blogger.com/profile/04317853095195622889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-5397900496445173482013-03-18T22:47:11.333-06:002013-03-18T22:47:11.333-06:00 Opps.... Cartilage Opps.... Cartilage Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-66374091455175956302013-03-18T22:46:12.986-06:002013-03-18T22:46:12.986-06:00Arthritis? Really that is cause by not enough cart...Arthritis? Really that is cause by not enough cart align between joints so the bones rub together......Arctic33https://www.blogger.com/profile/04317853095195622889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-90810607929059619422013-03-18T22:40:32.479-06:002013-03-18T22:40:32.479-06:00Sorry I had to cut off for a sec.. Now continued.....Sorry I had to cut off for a sec.. Now continued.....<br />The citizens of Jamaa prepared for the phantoms. From Appondale to Coral Canyons citizens stood protecting their country. They didn't know that shadow clanners were stealing gems from people. Jammasian ships surrounded Jamaa's waters. The shadow clanners came back with tons of treasure and gems. They went back onto the ship and his it. That was when the phantoms left the ship and headed straight towards The Township. When they were dircectly above The Township Switch did a sharp turn and was headed in the direction of The Lost Temple of Zios. Switch dived at the worn down statue of Zios. For underneath was the greatest Jamaasian Treasure of all time. The phantoms went under the statue only to find an army of Tigers. The dodged the tigers and took all the treasure that they could carry. The phantoms knew that some phantoms did not make it out for the roar of the tigers and the horrifying scream of the phantom. When the phantoms returned to their ship they found that the captain moved it. But it was to late for the phantoms. The citizens of Jamaa were all ready after the ship. The first ship, called The Shiveer put a cannon into the side of the phantoms ship, sinking it. No land animal was brave enough to dive into the ship and get the treasure back. The ocean animals are not yet ready to take the treasure back to land, for they are afraid it might cause something bad to happen again. 100 years later a great mountain was discovered above Appondale. The mountain was named after the great ship, Shiveer. The spirit of the phantoms that risked their lives to get the treasure under Zios' statute is said to still be there. Legend says that if you sleep by the statue the phantoms spirits come to life. Today, we know that is true. Now, the small war that is not mentioned anymore was called The Shiveer War. Nobody knows why the war and the mountain was named after the ship, Shiveer but that is the way it is and forever will be.<br />The End<br />~ Arctic33Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4124593257144100063.post-80259360051941305022013-03-18T22:37:12.310-06:002013-03-18T22:37:12.310-06:00The giveaway isn't really fair to those who do...The giveaway isn't really fair to those who don't have YouTube accounts. My parents don't let me. Please change this SnowyClaw!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com