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Deep in the sea grass and kelp of the mysterious Kani Cove there lies a darker secret than even Deep Blue can hold. A wreck with the unmistakable mark of a phantom, filled with countless treasures. . .
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| This mystery has been sent in by many, many jammers. |
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Purple and red is a strange combination but I guess the mask is pretty cool!
ReplyDelete~bunnyrockerzrock~
No, that's not right. Let me try that again...
DeletePurple and red is a strange combination... I find the mask very ugly!
Much better.
~bunnyrockerzrock~
Every different color Monday Rare items are ugly in my opinion, so I stopped buying Monday Rares cuz those rares look exactly the same as the items right now. I thought there will be like free worns or something like they did for fox hats and viking hats as Monday Rares!
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The only Monday thing I bought was last year for the rare pigtails cause I really wanted pigtails last year, and the color wasn't bad. Besides that, I don't buy them
DeleteLexie1234
I actually think that this one might be worth the gems! Too bad that Mom canceled my membership. D= To win her back over, either I have to pay every month's membership or prove that I still play imal Jam daily! D=
Delete@ Amy
DeleteIf you want I'll buy an extra for you and save it till you get the membership back. I don't mind since I have like 12,000 gems per account. 12 × 3 = 36 I have nearly a total of 36,000 gems from all my accounts! XD
~Friday
Yeah, sort of...Not as strange as orange and blue...but I get what your saying xD.
Delete@Friday
WHOA! O.O
*faints*
Rare Lion Hat was HIDEOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ReplyDeleterisks including osteoporosis, heart disease, and arthritis.
Men can follow these health and fitness tips to lose weight and get healthy and fit.
The decisive factor is that men would want to show
themselves as hot and rock solid before the fashionable ladies as ever.
Here is my blog post - fitness tips and quotes
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Delete@Anonymous
DeleteYou realize were only kids, right? Most of us, 15-...
Menopause?? That's a thing that happens to grandmas. OMG.
DeleteWell, guys, this is a robot, so stop trying to talk sense into it...
DeleteArthritis? Really that is cause by not enough cart align between joints so the bones rub together......
DeleteOpps.... Cartilage
Deletewaaaaaaaaaaah
ReplyDeletei cant get free membership then im only 9 and i dont have a youtube account waah
kitty07195
boohoo
I'm 10 so I can't get one either!!!! I've never had a membership!!! This is soooooooooooooooooooo unfair!!! hlyndzy
DeleteDon't worry, simply pretend you are like 20 and voila, you have an account! Don't worry, both me and Mia776 did that.
DeleteI pretended I'm like 14 or 15. You just put in a different age. It is lying though, well not for me. I'm going to be 13 in October. Then society will recognize me as "old enough" for social networking accounts.
Delete~Friday
It's okay lol. You'll get one someday!
DeleteI always lie about my again stuff like that......
DeleteAge... What is wrong with my spelling lol
DeleteSadly, the rare Monday is member :'( Anyways, good blog, snowy :)
ReplyDelete~aliceauw
All the members think the rare item sucks anyway. You aren't missing much. xD
DeleteYep, you hit it right on Anonymous!
DeleteI wish they made more RIM's non member...
DeleteThe ship Wreck in Kani Cove is none other than the Great Phantom Loa. A group of phantoms were exploring one day when they discovered the oceans of Jamaa. This was way before any animals had ever discovered them.
ReplyDeleteThe phantoms constructed a boat, so they could explore this strange new world even more. They named it The Phantom Loa. The phantoms set sail across the oceans, and had many wonderful adventures. Everything they saw made them feel happy, like brightly coloured coral and baby seahorses. The phantoms decided they no longer wanted to be bad, and hoped that one day, they could change the feelings of other phantoms too.
In time, the Phantom Loa was no longer able to sail, so the phantoms broke it up and sunk it. However, Spark, the lead phantom, had another idea. "Let's turn it into a shop! That way, the wreck won't go to waste." The other phantoms nodded in agreement.
So, they got to work. The phantoms all made helemts so they could breath underwater. They made cool new chaires out of kelp and shells. Sofas were fashioned out of soft white coral. They even made a tv out of an old barrel!
Soon, the oceans were discovered by animals, and the phantoms were able to finally sell their creations. Their dream is still to change the feelings of every phantom and to make them good. Hopefully one day, they'll suceed.
From Ruby43 on Animal Jam :)
Nice story! It had not that many spelling errors!
DeleteWow! Pawsome story!
Deletenice story ruby43:)
ReplyDeletei dont like the rare.
anyway plz visit my blog it has only 1 comment and not much veiws-->http://bunny02206.blogspot.com./
and i suscribed to your channel too:)
ReplyDeletei got a glitch!if one of your buddy deactivated and u send a mail u get "you can't send mail to this jammer!"
ReplyDeleteI don't think they are deactivated. They have just not logged on in a while like 8 months. This happened to my storage account, skyway. When i logged back in it was fine lime a normal profile.
DeleteUm, more like a strange thing...
DeleteYeah, Jamaa's data is full of interesting things! If somebody here knows how to look at everything in Animal Jam's code, tell me if there is anything unused in there... Maybe Animal Jam intended to put the Alphas in Jamaa after Beta, but the database kept crashing so they just stopped attempting that!
Off topic again. Silly me.
Delete@Amy Jiao
Delete...What?
Hey Snowy, I will click the advertisement everyday, since you use it for giveaways! Is it a good idea if all of us click it everyday?
ReplyDelete~Severus1
As long as some of us have the time, of course!
DeleteGood idea ;)
DeleteMy username is sirhappyviking I am a non member I used to have a one month membership. I am not alowwed to buy any membership even with my money. I read this blog every day it is the best!
ReplyDeleteSame :(
DeleteSAME! last thing i bought i wasnt allowed to buy
Deletewas 3 month arctic wolf membership at walmart
My mom just canceled my membership, and I need to prove to her that I can pay for it. D=... Or I can buy a certificate, because if you do the math it is actually cheaper than just paying normally for 3 months. Use this data to convince your parents.
Delete@Amy Jiao
DeleteI hope you get a membership again :C. But it wont make you any less pawsome!! :D
Sky high can get you a lot of gems! I just got a lei from there! But ever wondered why for RIM there is no furniture?
ReplyDeleteI know....I wish there were rare furniture items...I want a rare blue heart couch...anyone else? :D
DeleteA rare blue heart couch would be pretty. :D
DeleteI've been sending this in their suggestion box: "Dear animal jam, please make white fairy wings a future monday rare. I think they would be so pretty. :D" I've sent it like 3 times now. I rly want them in white. I'd definitely buy lots if they did. :3
I suggest a braided bead bracelet. Like the ones you see people in Central America wearing.
Delete~Friday
Your suggestions are all wonderful things! I would love to see them on AJ sometime, and I'm sure that rare den items would make more people happy, we need more rare den items!
Delete@Friday
DeleteYes....Braided bead bracelets are pawsome! That's one human item I wouldn't mind...
Happy Change-the-Color Monday!
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DeleteWhat is that? 0.0
DeleteThat's a neat expression! Even though it's being sarcastic. XD
Delete~Friday
The expression just means that they took an item and changed the color. Happy-change-the-color monday!
Delete~Friday
Ohhh....I get it, yeah......that's the perfect name for it :P
DeleteMore like: Happy limited edition ugly-color-item-monday!!
DeleteWhere aaaalllll your dreeeeeams come truuuuue (not). xD
THat above post sounded a little harsh (sorry AJ) I just wanted to join in on the sarcasm. xD
DeleteManxylion, I would say that you were the one who got the full scoop. =P
Delete@Manxylion
DeleteYeah....I somewhat agree xDD
I think I'll try out for a story! Here goes nothin'! :P
ReplyDeleteAhem...
Just as in the days of old in our world, when the pirates ruled the seven seas, the oceans of Jamaa were under the power of the Phantoms. The sailed swiftly, gliding on the surface of the water on their powerful ship, The Darkness. No animal dared wander out farther than Crystal Sands, for fear they would be spotted by the Phantoms of the ocean, and at night, the animals were strictly forbidden to stay away from the beach. It saddened Sir Gilburt, the tiger Alpha, to see that the Jammers were always fearful when they came to his land. He wanted them to instead be relaxed and peaceful. At the next meeting of the Alphas, where this time they gathered at the Mira statue in Jamaa Township, Sir Gilburt brought up the fact of Crystal Sands. "To fully restore peace to Crystal Sands, we must take back the ocean, and defeat the Phantoms that patrol it day and night," Greely growled, his eyes suggesting he didn't care even if Crystal Sands was washed away into the swirling depths of the ocean. "But how are we to do that?" Graham said, clucking his tongue. No one answered, not even Greely, who was very tactful in his strategies.
~To Be Continued~
(DUN DUN DUN DUHHH)
.: hannahandmemy :.
Please continue the story! It's turning out great!
Delete~Friday
Yeah! Your story actually caught my eye, and I'm picky when I choose what to read! Besides, the story actually matches the personalities I gave the Alphas on my blog:
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@ Amy
DeleteWill you review my story blog?
followthestrays.blogspot.com
~Friday
Thank you, thank you! -bows then falls- Ouch. -rubs head- You guys just make my day! :3
Delete@Friday - I'll definitely continue! :D
.: hannahandmemy :.
The only response Graham got was a sudden flash of lightning that seemed to shatter the darkening sky with electric claws. Instantly, the meeting split up. Peck stopped in her tracks as she fled to her burrow and looked up at the sky, which quickly was being crowded by ominous clouds. The wind buffeted her fur, clawing at her with icy paws. Something caught her eye in the billowing clouds above and she gasped. You see, Peck had an eye for art and was always alert to detail. She noticed the clouds were in two separate groups, one in the shape of a dolphin, the other in the form of a seal. Peck took note in her mind of these strange shapes, because deep down inside her she knew for certain that they had great significance in taking back the ocean. She turned her head to blink her fur from her eyes, but when she looked up once more, the mysterious formations in the dark blue-black clouds was but a memory. Peck quickly scurried away as a steady rain began to patter on the dusty stone path that swirled around the sapphire form of the Sky Mother. The droplets of rain trailing down its frozen feathers look much like tears to Peck, and the sheen off of the blue stone reminded her of the peaceful seas. Peck knew at that moment that the mother of Jamaa was counting on them to take back the ocean.
DeleteTBC... that stands for "to be continued." ;)
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DeleteMorning sunlight spilled out of the storm clouds that were quickly fleeing to the other side of the ocean as the sun climbed higher. A muscular tiger holding a soothing strawberry smoothie stepped out of his rickety hut on the beachside, and he took a deep breath of the salty air of dawn. Immediately, Captain Melville noticed the unusually high level of the tide. The waves lapped up to the porch of his juice hut, swirling with debris from the storm. Even though he had been living on the beach for all of his days, and they were many, he could never remember the tide coming in this far before. Melville knew of the none-stop heavy rains the previous night, but it still surprised him to see the water where the hot sand usually burned his pads. He raised his eyes farther out, about to where his favorite game Overflow was, and he suddenly spied two animals in the shallow water. Melville squinted, cursing under his breath at his failing eyesight. Instead, he leapt out into the water, churning up the sand as he waded farther out to where the two strange animals were. He had never seen them before, he was sure of that. As he padded closer, the water lapping at his chest fur, he realized with a jolt that they were animals of the ocean. It was quite rare to sight an ocean creature, for they most always stayed within the depths of their watery home. One was a seal and the other was a dolphin. The water was obviously too shallow for the dolphin to move more than a flipper, and the seal franticly tried to push her back out to the ocean. Hearing Melville’s splashes, he turned with a hiss and feebly guarded his stranded companion.
TBC!!! :D
. : hannahandmemy : .
It keeps getting better! I want to see how the story turns out so once again, please continue! If you want you can see my story blog
Deletefollowthestrays.blogspot.com
~Friday
Thanks so much! I'll take a look at your blog, Friday! :)
DeleteOkay, I will continue now...
"I mean no harm," Melville meowed in the way tigers can. The seal relaxed a little but still picked up his gleaming trident with his paw. Melville flinched, but continued. "My name is Captain Melville," he said. "Who are you?" The seal was obviously reluctant. "M-my name is Poseidon," he faltered. Melville ducked his head. "Nice to meet you," he said, twitching his tail. "Well I'm kind of in a tie now, so talk later," Poseidon hissed, swiping his head back to his business and attempting to push the beached dolphin back to sea. "Wait, I can help!" Melville sheathed his claws and aimed all his strength into his paws and heaved on the dolphin's body. He heard a dizzy groan coming from her as she slid across the sand underneath the blanket of tide. "Good," Poseidon sighed heavily, giving up his force as Melville pushed his dolphin friend's body into deeper water. She instantly flipped up and began to leap out to the open ocean. "Come back, Venus!" Poseidon shouted, his voice cracked with gratitude. Venus splashed up and twisted midair, droplets scattering an ark of diamonds. She dove and Melville could see her shape, abstract and wavering with the ripples, gracefully swimming toward them. She stopped abruptly when she came to the shallow water, and Melville noticed she was just where the waterline had once been. She lifted her head out of the water, beads of water rolling off her rosy skin. She peered up at Melville, and spoke up. "Thank you, stranger. My name is Venus." Melville almost felt put off because she didn't call him 'Captain Melville,' but he knew she wasn't expected to. Melville turned to Poseidon, who was trembling in his sagging sea-green cloak and staring at the ocean. His eyes were huge and petrified. "What's wrong?" Melville asked. "We should have told them sooner," he whispered, in a tone that made Melville shudder as an icy shiver crawled down his spine.
TBC!
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Oh yeah, I forgot to say I got a Google account! XD
DeleteDerpy manatees, you have to love 'em!
Who likes my profile pic? LOL
. : hannahandmemy : .
Yay! Fresh new account! DUN DUN DUN DUHHH! XD
DeleteA shadow, black as night, crossed the shining water, snatching Melville's horrified attention. He gasped and glanced back to the shore, but it seemed as if his paws were rooted to the sand and the water held him with splashing cuffs. His fur stood on end, spiking along his neck and back. For there, leaving the horizon to pay Jamaa's shores a visit, was the terror of the seas, The Darkness! It was the great and powerful Phantom ship, patrolling the waters, remaining undefeated. The plundered Jamaa every change they had, greedy and power hungry. The treasury of Mira, under the Chamber of Knowledge, was running low because of their merciless raids. The ship had not been back for several long months, and just when Melville thought Jamaa was truly at peace, they had returned. Melville dashed away to the dock near his hut, which was situated between the two islands of Crystal Sands. He padded speedily up the incline of the dock, and leapt onto the deck of his beloved ship, The Mola Mola. He lifted the anchor with a heave, and he flung it down on the deck with a clang. He padded fearfully but proudly up to the helm, and wrapped his paws around the worn handles of the wheel. Again, he took a deep breath of the fresh, open air which smelled of the ocean. He noticed a tinge of repulsive dirt, the smell of Phantoms. "For Mira, for Zios, and for the oceans!" Melville whispered, though in his heart he doubted their victory.
TBC...
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I like your profile pic! :3
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DeleteThe Alphas rushed out to the flooded Crystal Sands at the sound of the Phantom's battle cry. It was an evil, haunting sound. When they arrived, Captain Melville was steering out of his harbor, while the Phantom ship glided forward, gaining momentum, to destroy his seemingly feeble attempts. Peck rushed out to the water's edge and waved her arms as she screamed in an annoying, high-pitched voice to Melville. "Wait for us!" she yelled, jumping into the water and shivering as the coldness crept through her fluffy fur. Beginning to sink, she thrust her head above the water and hollered, "I can't swim! I'm drowning!" Cosmo rolled his eyes. "You're in the shallows, Peck; you can stand," growled Greely. Peck's head popped out of the water. A cheeky grin spread across her bunny face. "Oh," she giggled. "Hurry!" Sir Gilburt yowled, pointing to Melville's ship as it picked up speed away from the beach. "We have a ship to catch!" Graham's eyes lit up. "I know!" said the old monkey Alpha, and once again his inventor instincts kicked in. In no more than a minute or so, he had carefully constructed a catapult to fling them to the deck of Melville's ship.
TBC
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Delete@Mia ~ Thanks! :) I love manatees, do you? .3.
Delete"Who wants to go first?" he said, brightened up by his idea. The other Alphas looked stunned and reluctant. "One of us has to stay behind," Graham explained. "I will," Liza volunteered. "I must stay true to my duty and protect my land, Jamaa." Graham nodded and quickly explained to her how to use the catapult. "You're wasting time!" Sir Gilbert roared, unsheathing his claws and sliding them through the silky sand. "Are you sure it's safe?" Liza asked, not sure if she intrusted herself to launch her friends across the water. "Oh course," Graham said, rolling his eyes and clucking his tongue.
. . .
Somehow, though it seems very strange indeed, Liza managed to get her fellow Alphas, one by one, across the widening expanse of open water to Captain Melville's ship. Sir Gilburt was relieved as he stood, dizzy, that there was still time to spare and that The Darkness was still far away enough to prepare for combat. Captain Melville was surprised at the Alphas' arrival, especially at that way they had reached his ship. Melville greeted his brother, Sir Gilburt, and they worked together to plan a clever strategy. Greely ignored them, and stuck his nose in the air with a snort. Sir Gilburt snickered and went back to planning. The battle came all too soon, with the impact of the cannon ball and the spray of splintered wood. The attack caught the Alphas and Melville by surprise, but they were soon back on their paws and aiming their fire. After only five hits, they watched confidently as the great ship of the evil Phantoms went down into the murky waters, splitting in half with a deafening crack before peacefully settling to the bottom in a forgotten pile of debris.
TBC
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Poseidon and Venus splashed happily together in the water as the setting sun painted the sky in hues of red and gold. There had been a great victory that day, and the victors were the great Alphas of Jamaa. They had finally proved their power once and for all. "Hey, I have an idea," Venus said, staring out at the open ocean, which was flooded with golden rays. Crystal Sands had begun to dry up, and finally, peace had returned to Jamaa and the ocean animals were free to be Jammers. "Let's go explore that wreck!" she whistled, swirling around her seal friend in the water. "Okay, but don't you think it'll be dangerous?" Poseidon said, though inside he was all for it. "Nah, can't be," Venus said. "And I know where she went down! Follow me!"
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The two ocean animals weaved through the kelp and sea grass and beheld the entrance to the ship, a huge cannon hole lined with splinters. The darkness coming from inside was shrouded with omen, but Venus, forever adventurous, swam straight inside without hesitating for one moment. Poseidon followed more slowly, and warily look around at the interior of the sunken ship. Poseidon saw Venus' ghostly form in the dark slip through a cabin doorway, and he heard her gasp. Startled, he rushed to her side. Poseidon's eyes widened, for there, in the King Phantom's cabin, was a sparkling pile of treasure, stolen from Jamaa over the centuries. "That's why The Darkness sunk," Poseidon whispered, his voice quivering like an arrow as it hit the target. "The Phantom's greed weighed it down." The gold shone like the sun and the gems, oh, countless gems, sparkled like stars scattered through the water.
TBC
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DeleteEpilogue...
DeletePoseidon and Venus were never heard from again. Some say they met the King Phantom who had somehow survived the sinking, and there was a bloody battle right there in the sunken ship. One thing for sure is, two mysterious statues were discovered many years later when the oceans were opened up for all Jammers and The Darkness was turned into an underwater shop that sold the long-forgotten Phantoms' plunder. Along with them, there is a stark Phantom engraved in a shield on the bow of the ruined ship, which was not there when The Darkness met her watery grave. What do you think? Some questions remain unanswered, and it is up to the Jammers to fill in for the missing information, lost forever in the fogs of time...
Here are some hints...
If Jammers successfully complete their journey book for Kani Cove, they receive a toy boat pond, which seems to depict an epic but short-lived battle that destroys the Phantom ship and frees the oceans from the evil grasp of the Phantoms. Also, the Cruise Ship Party's idea revolves around a vacation ship called the AJS Mola Mola, and if legends are true, then its name suggests it is the restored version of Captain Melville's old ship, the one that defeated the Phantoms of the Ocean.
That's part of the fun of being a Jammer... The rich history, the mysterious legends, the forgotten secrets, and the fact that we are each and every one part of this great quest...
THE END! Now, you must continue the circle and create the legends that will be told and retold by the Jammers in the next generations, even if parts grow uncertain and are lost in the fog of time. I want you to read and understand the legends of today so that you can create the legends of tomorrow. So, as long as Mira lives, TO BE CONTINUED!
(For my story, at least, the end!)
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OMGOSH your story is so awesome!!!! Where's ya learn the write like that????? No offence to anybody else, but this is the best story EVER!! Definely a winner!!! :D :D :D :D :D I loved the part when the Alphas got catupulted to the ship
DeleteYou should ask Snowy to post that like on a separate link!!!
DeleteWhere DID you learn to write like that?
I like the part where Peck was 'drowning' in the shallows though. XD
AND I COMPLETELY AGREE WITH ANONYMOUS ABOVE ME!!!
I LOVE THAT story!!!
I love your videos snowy I always give them a top rating or thumbs up! My user is horseloveralm, I'm member but I only have a few days, and I might give it to my nonmember buddy in real life!
ReplyDeleteGood reasons, although it would actually have a chance at the win on Youtube!
DeleteI agree, amy.
Deleteok good, i have a youtube account, i'll start commenting after school if i get a chance. It's fairly new though, so i don't have any videos uploaded on it yet.
ReplyDeleteOkay, I recommend Screen-Cast-O-Matic for ANimal Jam videos! It keeps the image stable, and you can do it off browser, too.
DeleteMe too. I use it too. I have a paid account though, I didn't like the logo...But, my mom paid for it, because she uses it too for business videosssss :P
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ReplyDeleteAs many of you jammers know, there was a battle between the phantoms and Jamaa a long time ago. Before that battle, Sir Gilbert lived at the top of Crystal Sands in a cave. He used to go down to the shore and watch the waves roll by. But now he knew the phantoms were attacking. Sir Gilbert had to meet the other alphas at the township everyday now. So the phantoms built a boat. It took a while. After it was finished they found a shield with a phantom on it. The phantoms put it on the boat. It was more like a pirate ship now, or to be more specific, a "phantom ship". So if they lost they could sail the seas. The alphas couldn't swim anyways. (Seals weren't found back then) So on the day of the battle, the phantoms lost. They rushed to their ship and sailed away. But something hit the bottom of the ship. The phantoms rushed to the side of the boat and looked down. This put all the weight on one side. The boat started tipping. It sunk. This was over Kani Cove. But heres the part for you to continue, what hit the boat? A narwhal? But if so, why hadn't the alphas found it in the seas yet? Could it have been Venus or Posideindsfsuefg (However you spell it) xP
ReplyDeletebut with a narwhal suit on? Many answers, Jammers. Show yours below in the replies section under my comment! If you are a anonymous, Please, show your username somewhere in the reply! Thanks guys! I hope you liked my story!
The mysterious narwhal... The Alphas probably thought it was just a rock that scathed the boat, then they forgot and went to attend more important matters. The narwhal is yet to be discovered Jammers!
Delete~Friday
It was Harper, traveling the lands of No-ice. She thought the barnacles on the hull would taste good, but accidentially sunk the vessel. XD
DeleteAnd Sir Gilbert CAN swim, without all that armor of course, tigers are able to swim.
uh katie7. tigers ARE able to swim and they love the water and sir gilbert is a tiger so he can swim! Sir gilbert is my favourite alpha!
DeleteWell, tigers can't swim that far out and that far deep. Besides its her story. My fave Alpha is Peck. XD
Delete~Friday
I think maybe, like Friday said, an undiscovered animal was the one responsible! - points at random manatee and screams like a tattletale - "A chubby manatee did it!" Aren't manatees just PAWSOME?! XD I sure hope they come to Jamaa some day soon...
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Lol. Manattes are an example of a conch potatoe. See what I did there? Sorry, I'm not good with puns. XD
Delete~Friday
I have some time before the bus gets here: One day while an eager little koala was on a monsterous ship.His ship had a might sail and a gigantic phantom on the front, the ship was called the Cosmo. One day this fellow koala's ship was in a terrible storm, they could either take the smaller boats back to where they came from, or crash into a small island. The other koalas were wanting to take the smaller lifeboats back to shore. Sir Captain Littlefoot went along with the others and sent everyone off on the lifeboats. This little koala wanted to see the big island. he stay and somehow survived for three days untill they came upon the great island but crashed vitally into the sand. This little koala said "I'm my own person now." He went to the center of the island, only to find a bird sitting in the middle with a couple of animals around her. She came up to the koala and asked what his name was and he said, "Cosmo."
ReplyDeleteOoh, short but nice story!
DeleteThe bus was pulling up to I had to sum it up, lol
DeleteSir, there's a terrible storm. We can either take the smaller boats back to the dock, or crash into a small island. I recommend crashing into a small island.LolsXD
DeleteWhy did I do that?
Okay, okay, I'm sorry, didn't mean to be offensive. you could have just said 'they had to take the boats back' instead of 'they could take the boats back or crash into an island'. Then mean people like me wouldn't do mean comments like the one above. sorry anyway.
DeleteI never buy the rares. I mean they are stupid! Who wants a rare item that u can buy non rare. Oh and snowy claw stop doing mail time over and over its getting annoying.
ReplyDeleteHow is it annoying? Some people like to watch them, like myself
DeleteLexie1234
@Snowy Raccoon
DeleteYeah, you're definitely nice. -_- It's Snowy's life. It's her channel, blog, etc;. And who said you HAD do buy RIMs? No one. So stop hating and go find something to do.
I do that sort of feedback, Anonymous and CM, so be a little nicer! I mean, she is correct, and that is HER opinion, not something to be dictated by a stranger.
DeleteI know... Sorry. I didn't wake up nicely this morning. .-. But I'm still entitled to my personal opinion.
DeleteLike in the comment i posted once, here is the Random Story: It says that the shipwreck is another ship in the fleet of Noah's Ark, and brought the animals to Jamaa
ReplyDeleteLong ago there was no jamaa. Just sea, salty water with no apparent life. But underwater there was a vortex. The fish and sharks and even undersea bacteria did not dare enter where the vortex was.
I'm sure you all know about noah's ark right? Well, there was not 1 ship but 2. A smaller oneheld a few more animals. The small ship sailed alongside the bigger one. One day it went astray.
The very day the small ship sailed away, the vertex began to stir. With command from Zios, Mira reared outta the vortex and into the sky. She reached nto te water wih her giant talons and built a land out of rocks.
A few days after Jamaa was completed, the small ship wrecked in what is not Kaini Cove. Tis alerted Mira, so she flew to the drowning animals' rescue. She saw that they needed help. She used her powers to heal the animals and stem there hunger. Whenthe floods died down she built a templ out of rocks. The day after she stood atop the temple and proclaimed, "This land will be known as Jamaa!" All the animals cheered for the newfound land. Mira made plants and trees grow, dividing Jamaa into lands. She dug out the rivers with her claws and used powers to make water flow in them. She then called up five animals one from every type f animal. The young wolf Lee, the panda cub Liz, the tiger Gilbert, the monky Ham, and the koala Mo. She name the different names, whe wolf Greely, the tiger Sir Gilbert, the koala Cosmo, the panda Liz, and te monkey Graham. "You will be the Alphas, the guardians of this land" Mira said.
The animals lived in peace for many years, until an earthquake shook the land, killing zios. Mira could sense a great emtyness inside her, and flew all over the island. the minute her eyes rested on the rubble, she knew zios was no more. She cried all day and night, and in the blackness small dust specks arose in the night. They grew bigger, and by the next afternoon the land of zios was in ruins. Even the Alphas fled in their tracks! But one night all the alphas gathered in thier dreams. In this dream the dead Zios told them to stop running and fight. Liza suggested they face the phatoms, as they were called by the cretures livig is zios, as they strike. So the next morning all the Alphas stalked the phantoms into the township, where the mira statue was. Most went to destroy the statue, while some terrorized the jammers living there. they could not defeat them all alone. but they did. With Grahmas nimble fingers, the Alphas had spears to fight with. Soon, the phatoms had retreated into where the wrecked Zios idol was (Mira sliced it to bits in her grief and guilt and anger) and they are only tempted out withthe promise of the flesh of sleeping and knocked-out Jammmers. We celebrate this event every october by wearing costums that look like phantoms, ad by catching phantoms in cages.
Since the battle with he phantoms, Jamaa has been peaceful despite a few mishaps with th phantoms. But we are all strong in the kowlage that the Alphas ar thee to protect us :)
THE END!!!!! Hope you like it!
Nice story, it makes sense!
DeleteWow very long story! I like it though. :)
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ReplyDeleteokay i have to go soon so, well I already made a story of this ono the Movie banner monday mystery, just check the comments and read the one singed, Ratratrat11 OR Sir Tiny Tiger, Okay got to go.
see you in jamaa bye.
Me think the mystery is the phantoms ship, when there was a war, jammers/alphas vs phantoms, and the jammers/alphas won, and the phantoms ship sank right there, in Kani Cove ^.^!
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Fun parties indeed! :D I had a fun weekend... And spring break... Now I have to go back to school. D*:
ReplyDeleteya lol hmm i have always wondered about that phantom carving...
ReplyDeleteone day,the alphas were sailing to find new lands.then,they met the phantoms on there travels!!!they were outnumbered. the phantoms claimed the ship too soon,assuming they would win the fight.they carved a phantom in the ship.liza and greely made a plan together and told the other alphas.liza said"alphas they are too strong we must make a plan!luckily,me and greely have developed one."they got in a huddle and liza explained the plan.the next day,only greely and sir gilbert came out to fight.the phantoms jeered at them.but something strange happened.phantom warriors kept dissapearing!the phantoms retreating,but not before making a giant hole in the ship! the alphas were in trouble!suddenly,there was a rush on wind and the alphas were saved by mira.she said"go alphas!discover new fun lands for our jammers!"and so,ever since that day,we have had our underwater shop called kani cove,and the alphas havent been seen since the fight.
sorry if its bad this is my first time writing something like this!
~MoonyWormtailPadfoot(aka IamBrambleClaw101 and Warriorcatsluver101)
YUSH! Moony, Wormtail, and Padfoot is from Harry Potter! I am a major potterhead :0
Deletei meant retreated not retreating lol
ReplyDelete~MoonyWormtailPadfoot(aka IamBrambleClaw101 and Warriorcatsluver101)
Hey guys. If you see the Anonoymous with a picture of the Rugrats as her profile pic please let me know! I have to apologize for being jealous that she comments more than I do. I felt threatened. Sorry Anonoymous. Anyways, I'm thinking of changing my profile pic. What should I go with? Oh and one more thing! Would someone check my blog and leave a comment? It would make me so happy! Thanks!
ReplyDelete~Friday
I just discovered something!
Delete1. Take your shoe size
2. Multiply by 5
3. Add 50
4. Mutiply by 20
5. Add 1012
6. Subtract the year you were born
It worked for my dad and I! His shoe size is 9 and he is 55. I am 12 and my shoe size is 4. Reply and let me know how it works!
~Friday
Oh I forgot to mention. The first number is your shoe size and the other two are your age.
Delete~Friday
I'm 1O and my size is a five o.o. Mine = 1010. I'm not sure if it worked for me xD
Deletehi snowyvlaw. i am sheepa1 and i would like a membership because my membership is expiring and i would really love a new one. Also, my friend has a hummingbird and she really wants me to get one and wants to get it for me. i really can not let her spend her money on me and i don't have enough to buy it my self. I don't have an E-mail my self, but you can contact me through my mom's :
ReplyDeleteiffat2@aol.com (no capitals)
just reminding about the membership i was gonna give it to my friend so she can play animal jam
ReplyDeleteand have fun-- she is always left out in fun games
so im gonna help her
i dont like the colours of the ninja mask ): I think they should make a golden ninja mask!
ReplyDeleteThat would be a great idea! With sand markings on it.
Delete~Friday
Wait doesn't AJ already sell the golden ninja mask? Or am i crazy? XD
DeleteBecause i thought Epic Wonders sells every gold item. XD nvm
gianni14stipsglitches.blogspot.com
They should sell every gold item....But wouldn't they be super heavy on your animal? o.o
DeleteI could be wrong..... but does anyone ever get the feeling that AJHQ is taking away all the good monday rares and taking away tradeable monthly member gifts to encourage the players to be less greedy and less scammy? Cause I'm sure parents are often sending complaint mail to the site about their kids getting scammed.
ReplyDeleteSee this is why we can't have nice things. :(
lol
It makes sense Lol.
Delete~Friday
hi it's me marie82231! i posted yesterday.did you get my phantom hat? i hope you liked it :D good luck on all of you wh enter in the membership give away
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marie82231
Yeah that would make sense how come I haven't noticed that before!?
DeleteMaybe D:
Deleteim sick :(
ReplyDelete*beggs to go to school*
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marie82231
LUCKY! I usually pretend im sick so i dont have to go to school! (ok not usually,sometimes!)
DeleteXD why would someone beg to go to school?
DeleteI would beg to NOT go to school XD
Oh but then my mom won't let me use the computer :(
gianni14stipsglitches.blogspot.com
@Gianni14
DeleteSame here. But then I go to the nook! I can still comment on here xD.
I'm alive! If anyone cares. Sorry, it's been SUPER DUPER busy. Not that anyone cares. Anyway, thanks for the reviews on my mini story (a week-ish ago?) I'll check out all you're blogs. I went to the zoo... and... didn't go to church yesterday and... yeah. I'm alive!
ReplyDeleteGood to hear you're alive! So... about that blog checkibg thing... will you review my story blog?
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You can look at my main blog but it's ok if you don't. Please leave a comment so I know I'm not alone!
~Friday
Sure :)
DeleteGlad to hear you're alive too.. unless your dead by the time your spirit reads this ^^
We do care 0.0
Deletetwo pirate phantoms where looking out for the alphas on thier boat shrreek :Q the boat hit an ice berg (like the titanic) mira was flying over the boat looking at the phantoms and she wonders *what happend to them* then she honks as loud as a great blue herron can then the alphas apperard they made wholes in the ship until the ship fell inside the ocean. but the alphas had little to know that in the ship was treasuere stolen from other jammers like golden tiaras and gold bow and arrows. then a place nammed deep blue was descoverd by a team of curiuse seals. they saw all the treasuere and said we will keep it all to ourselfs but then the under sea volcano urupted then they where burried in the sand but before they could know.in the past before the alphas defeated the ship the phantoms had made some nice furniture for thier ship.back to the perestent. the other animals that had visited had thought to make the ship a mini game and they did and thats what made phantom treasure the game and the level nammed:sunken ship :D hope you liked it. By:Smart06704
ReplyDeletei mean smart06703. they made the place a store for under water items :D
ReplyDeleteThis is my artical for the phantom ship thing mystery! Enjoy! :D
ReplyDeleteOne day the phantoms were sailing through the seas, laughing to themselves after every place they visited. They had been stealing items from inccocent jammers; Founders Hat's from brave wolves, who tried to fight back, Tail Armors from small bunnies, and Spikes from raccoons. They had so far visited almost every island in Jamaa, they just needed to visit one more, Crystal Sands, which as we all know is directly above the oceans. As soon as they reached the island, the thieves got to work, stealing as many items as they could from inccocent jammers. But, as a phantom tried to grab a worn off a panda's back, the panda tore off it's disguise, and the phantom imideently reconized her as Liza. Soon, Liza's alpha friends had appeared beside her, all glaring at the phantoms. The phantoms wanted to fight, but they knew it was hopless. They retreaded back to the ship as fast as they could. They were off in a second. They thought they were free from the alphas, but soon saw a gold glow overhead, it was the goddess Mira. She flew on to the phantoms ship and spoke in a misty voice. "You have been very bad, phantoms, stealing from my jammers. You should be punished. However, i will not hurt you, not this time. Jump into this raft for safety, well i destroy your boat."
The phantoms did as they were told. They sailed away and they watched as Mira sunk the ship beneath the waves. They made their getaway, but as they were sailing they heard Mira scold, "I hope you learned your lesson. Never steal again."
Soon, jammers had discovered the ship and all its treasures. They asked other jammers to help them turn the items into underwater furniter. Soon, they had opened Sunken Treasures, which was named by Mira, as you know why.
Hope you liked it! -hungergamesrock19375
Pawsome story!
DeleteThis might be long so prepare snowyclaw!
ReplyDeleteOne day, phantoms were sailing the seas of Jamaa. The leader of the phantoms was known for using his crew members to steal from other jammers in jamaa. Even when a jammer heard they would be coming to town they would run.The phantoms would even steal from underwater jammers! Over the years, the phantoms had collected riches from other jammers. The ship they sailed on was called The Phantom.
One day as they were sailing they came upon a new territory. It is now known as Kani Cove to us. The phantoms were scared because this place was very different than other places. It had sharp coral and large rocks! The phantoms had to be extra careful out here. The leader of the phantoms told other phantoms to see what they could steal from jammers here. The phantoms left and the leader kept exploring.
The phantoms swam down into the beautiful coral filled water in search of riches. They soon met a young female dolphin named Sunny. Sunny asked where the phantoms were from. One phantom replied "We are very poor and need gems to live." Sunny asked "How can I help you poor phantoms?" The phantoms were all staring at her rare hat. They had never seen anything like it before! The phantom replied "May we have your pretty hat?" Sunny asked why. "We just want to borrow it for a bit" Sunny thought she could trust the thieves and gave her the rare hat. Sunny said "Guard that hat with your lives!" The phantoms swam away and whispered "yeah ok..." The phantoms swam back to the surface to tell their leader the rare hat. But they were shocked when they didn't see their leader!
Leader's point of view:
The leader (named Rock) was still steering the boat over the rocky sea when he heard a big "BOOM" that shook the boat, followed by a "SLAM!" Rock was curious to see what happened and went to the front deck. He was frozen! The Phantom had crashed into a huge rock and was now sinking! Water started pouring into the ship and Rocky was panicking like crazy! He tried everything, he couldn't find anything to save his life. The other phantoms used the air cans and rafts! Everything he needed was gone, gone. Rocky had to do it. Surrender. Rock gave up trying. Waited until it was all over... Rock and The Phantom sank to the bottom.
The Phantom is still in Kani Cove and Rock still posses this ship. His crew members soon were arrested and didn't steal or scam again. If your ever shopping in Sunken Treasures, it's said you can sometimes hear Rock's voice saying "I never should have stole"
by:horseloveralm
Wow! Pawsome story! Keep up the good work!
Deleteoh i forgot after it sank it was still filled with other jammer's riches
ReplyDeletethat the phantoms stole
ReplyDeleteLol this isn't anything about this post.. But if you look closely to the 'Epic Seasonal Tree' it has, I think, Leprechaun footprints on it. .3.
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I see it! They are so cute xD
Deleteheres my guess on the monday mystery:
ReplyDeleteThe ship was once belonged to phantoms, pirate phantoms really. They stole from other jammers (and thats how got the items that are there today) but then one day, right before they stole from another ship sailing the oceans, the alphas apeared! They took down the phantom's ship leaving no phantom alive.
~wubgirls~ (username)
hi i know a glitch for crocs on aj. when you wear a clover balloon, it looks lik a moon balloon c ya bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI don't find it fair that we have to go on youtube to enter. What about us who arent aloud on there? I am one of those people. :( I tried to win it for my friend by t can't now
ReplyDeleteLots of Jammers are facing this problem today, you can always post here or tell Snowy personally by e-mail or JAG.
Delete~Friday
Eh pretty unfair.
DeleteSome parents don't let people get YouTube Accounts! >:I
gianni14stipsglitches.blogspot.com
@Gianni
DeleteYeah. I have a friend on AJ, and I really wanted a google account...but her mom kept saying no :|. Until her b-day came around, one day she came to my den and told me she got a blog :D
*I really wanted her to have a google account
DeleteI have a theory that the ship with a phantom on it can be Captain Midville's. Maybe his ship was possessed by phantoms. Or does he is a phantom or supports them! If he is a phantom he probably wanted to make a smoothie hut than do bad deeds phantoms do. That's just my theory though.
ReplyDeleteBy day, life on Crystal Sands was bright and filled with fun and laughter. But as the sun fell every night, doors were locked and children were called inside. Frightened citizens would stay wide awake in their beds, and many would take quick peeks through the window in the dark hours of the night, for they were on the lookout for the ragged flag of the Dark Terror. The Dark Terror was the most feared ship to sail the seas of Jamaa. Commandeered by none other than the villainous Black Cyclone, a heartless phantom who cared for nothing but riches, the Dark Terror terrorized and pillaged towns along the coast of Jamaa. It struck in the dark of the night, without a single warning or sound, and then disappeared as quickly as it had come. The scene it left behind was one of carnage and destruction. Everything the town had owned was taken by the Dark Terror. However, no amount of gold and money could satisfy the pirate captain. He would gaze at his gleaming coins and jewels, only to growl and demand for his crew to set sail for the nearest town. The Black Cyclone could never be satisfied, for his greed grew with each voyage to land.
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One moonless night, the Dark Terror was sailing over the glossy waters of Kani Cove. The crew of phantoms was rejoicing over their latest expedition to Crystal Sands, and the captain relaxed on a jeweled throne in his quarters, feasting on delicious stolen food. Something tingled inside of black phantom, and he sat forward in his throne, looking out his window. His acute sight picked up the distinct shape of a ship in the distance, and he howled angrily, just as a cannonball flew into the side of the Dark Terror.
Delete"Ambush!" the first mate screamed, and an arrow lodged itself in his arm. Cyclone picked up his curved sword, kicking the first mate aside. "All hands on deck! Fight back, you sorry excuses for phantoms!" He fought and fought, but he couldn't hold the Alpha's ship back. He glared at the figure at the head of the other ship. "Harper!" he screamed in a bloodcurling voice. The seal alpha stared at him for a lingering second. "This is for all the citizens of Jamaa that you have hurt and the lives that you have destroyed!"
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DeleteThe two crews continued on in battle, but it was clear who the victor would be. With a final scream, Captain Black Cyclone and his ship plunged into the depths of the water, and the captain and his crew and phantoms was finally gone. Harper sighed, the fire on the sinking ship flickering in her eyes. A penguin beside her looked at the weary alpha. "What is it, Harper?" The alpha gestured to the phantom's ship. "It's a pity that all the riches and belongings of the Jamaasians are gone now." The penguin smiled. "If you would like, me and the crew could unearth the ship and find the stolen goods. We could open a shop for all the animals of Jamaa to enjoy." Harper's eyes lit up. "That would be wonderful!"Today, all the animals of Jamaa can shop for glamorous goods in Kani Cove, in a ship-turned-shop called Sunken Treasures.
DeleteSorry for any grammatical or spelling errors, I hope you like my story for the Monday Mystery. ^^
DeleteEPIC STORY! :D
DeleteI like your story! It could be a Jammasian tale in fact.
Delete~Friday
One day,King Phantom ordered his crew/army of ferocious phantoms to sail the S.S Phantom dangerously close to Jamaa.As they sailed near,Harper the seal Alpha spots a distant ship on the horizon.
ReplyDeleteThat day was a very peaceful day for Harper,she was playing in the water and teaching the seal pups to swim. With nothing to worry about and the seal pups gone to play in Tierney's Aquarium,Harper was just sitting on a beach towel with a smoothie to watch the water.When she saw the ship she hopped up in alarm,dropping her smoothie and she runs to find Graham.
"Ahh there comes Harper," he sighs.Graham gets up and comes the rest of the way to Harper."Graham!" Harper exclaims,"Come on! *gasp* There's a.....ship,I think....it's King Phantom's!"Graham stares in horror,"King Phantom?!?!?! Why would he come here?!"Harper just shugs and leads the way to Crystal Sands.
"THE LAND OF JAMAA IS OURS MY ARMY!"shouts King Phantom,"WE WILL WIN ONCE AND FOR ALL! MIRA AND HER ARMY IS NO MATCH FOR US!!"The phantoms smile and snicker before shouting back,"YES OUR KING!"
Harper and Graham get to Crystal Sands.Graham pulls out his telescope and stares through,and to his horror he gasps,"Harper! Go get Mira! I will get the others!!" They both run off to get everyone.
"Oh my!" Mira exclaims,"Hop on my back Harper,and quick!" As they fly gracefully across the sky,they see animals and Alphas going towards Crystal Sands.
"FATHER! THE ANIMALS ARE GATHERING,THEY HAVE SPOTTED US!" shouts Prince Phantom to King Phantom.King Phantom sneers and says,"Lovely,how do slaves sound?" he jeers.
Mira calls for quiet and says to all the animals,"Do not worry,Jamaa will be safe once again,my Alphas will take care of this." The Alphas step forward proudly,puffing up their chests and say at once,"We will protect Jamaa and all the animals our dear Mira!"Mira looks at them and chuckles saying,"Our saviors."
"ATTACK MY ARMY!ELIMINATE THOSE ALPHAS!"shouts King Phantom.The phantom army sneer and start floating over to the land with the Alphas,that will surely be their land soon.
~END OF PART 1~
~funnyhahahaha P.S. Part 2 is coming and so is the battle!
"SAVE US ALPHAS!" shout the animals running around in fright.The Alphas are ready,they go forward screaming defiently.
ReplyDeleteThe phantoms meet the Alphas,and the war begins. Sir Gilbert sprints forward and takes down the nearest phantom.Prince Phantom."FATHER!" he screams in fear as Sir Gilbert slashes razor sharp claws across his face.King Phantom sees whats going on and flies toward his son.But alas,he's to late.Sir Gilbert lashes out again and this time,Prince Phantom turns to ash with a *POOF*. King Phantom stares,"MY SON!NOOOOOOO!"
Suddenly,everyone stops.The phantoms stare at their King falling apart in front of their eyes.They all float over to comfort him.
Harper blows on her conch shell and yells,"SEA DWELLERS,GET THE SHIP! LIFT IT AND TRAP THE PHANTOMS UNDER THE SEA!" Peck hears Harper shout and whispers to herself,"I'm sorry it has to be this way phantoms"
The sea animals hear their call and go and lift the ship.They heave with all their might and finally,throw it over the phantoms.It falls.They all fall.King Phantom only felt something bump his head and then black...everything goes black.
The animals cheer and whoop,"YAY ALPHAS!"but they don't know about King Phantom.
He wakes up,feeling wet and salty."My son," he whimpers,"Why my son?" He looks around to see it's all black. Black,that's what he saw after his son was gone.King Phantom fills with rage and shouts with all his might,"YOU WILL REGRET THIS MIRA! BEWARE!"
~THE END~
~funnyhahahaha
Thanks for reading! If you want can you please check out my videos on Youtube? My channel is funnyhahahaha357,please please please like and subscribe! I would be happy! :D
ReplyDeletePrologue
Long, long, ago, in the first Age of Beta, the oceans were not safe to visit. Why? Well, there was the feared Pirate Lady with her fleet of two-hundred ships. The Pirate Lady was a powerful and evil wolf, with no bounds for her viciousness and evil deeds. But there was one animal, and one animal only, who dared to explore the icy depths. She was a wolf on land, and a seal in the water. Her name was Aria.
Chapter One
One day, The Pirate Lady, Skulna, attacked a peaceful community to the west of Jamaa. She destroyed any that dared fight against her, and took the rest prisoner. One small tiger who had dared fight back, lived, but was seriously wounded. Her name was Tigra. Tigra was a friend of Aria, and she dragged her self to Aria's doorstep and collapsed. Aria opened the door and screamed in shock.
"HELP! HELP! GET COSMOS! HELP ME!" she yelled at a passing wolf. When Cosmos came, he said that Tigra would live, but she would need lots of rest. Aria learned that the Pirate Lady had attacked Tigra's village, and she asked the Alphas to meet her at her house.
Chapter Two
When the Alphas came, they all agreed immediately (even Greely and Sir Gilbert) that something, ANYTHING, had to be done.
"What we must do is lure Skulna into a battle with us," stated the normally quiet Harper, who was furious that anyone would harm her oceans.
"Agreed," said Greely. "But how?"
"I may have an idea on that one," said Aria.
"What?" rumbled Sir Gilbert.
"Skulna and I have had some... disputes in the past, and I just have to go out there and she'll come. I can leave on my ship."
"Wait a second!!! Your ship! All ships have been outlawed!!" exclaimed Graham.
"I kept mine," replied Aria. "Don't worry, I'm not stupid, no one else knows about it."
Chapter Three
Aria left on her sailboat the next morning, and the Alphas left in theirs twelve hours later, just as planned.
Aria had some fine sailing, but that wasn't what she wanted; she wanted to fight Skulna. You see, Skulna was a well known ally of the Phantoms, and Aria hated Phantoms with feeling so intense that it mad the volcanoes look like matches. They had killed her family, destroyed her home, and tortured her for a year and a day before she was rescued by the Alpha Greely.
Finally, she sighted Skulna's fleet on the horizon, just at moonrise. She began howling at the moon, and Skulna's ships headed straight toward her at a furious clip. She leaped aboard Skulna's ship and began fighting her way toward the wheel. Skulna stood there, her claws ready, her teeth gleaming.
Then the Alphas appeared! They destroyed the fleet, all but Skulna's ship, and watched Aria do battle with The Pirate Lady. They knew this was Aria's fight, and to enter could mean certain death. At last, Aria struck Skulna a deadly blow, and her ship heaved like a great animal and sank beneath the waves.
Now, a shop is opened up there, and it sells treasure that was found there. But that Phantom painted on the bow is still there, a memory of Skulna's alliance with the Phantoms.
The Wanderer
(kitty85451)
In a war with no one safe in ships were pirates who would want treasure for good and for bad. In pirate animals they would give treasure to the poor with no food to eat. In pirate phantoms they believe that they should keep the money and let the rich be more rich and let poor struggle from hunger ness. And all those pirates never met until they found out the most greatest treasures, The Lost Treasure Of Zois! Now they had sail from mighty storms which did not stop them from getting the treasure. So they had met arguing and fighting for treasure. Suddenly a spirit of Zois and Mira came to them saying to get half. This made the pirate animals agree but the pirate phantoms did not, so they had made an evil plan. So once they got half the treasure, the spirits were gone and the phantoms sneaked attacked the pirate animals. But the animals knew what was going to happen since they were ready for anything. Now the pirate animal won the battle, the phantom ship sank, the phantoms tried to call for help. Since the pirate animals were nice and not greedy the pirates helped the phantoms and gave half of their gold. This made the phantoms good and not greedy. Now everyone was shocked, but they mad a celebration for this. And so, today, the captains of the pirate phantoms and pirate animals were now a toy maker and invented the two ships from their experience when they were pirates. And luckily the pirates had made teamwork and had found the sunken ship for everyone to see. Now this was a story that had teamwork in it, oh and also some pirates go to the shop in a beach, you probably know it so i don't need to tell you. Well the end! - ellanicole2003
ReplyDeleteOnce a long time ago, before Jamaa was well populated, phantoms still visited to try to attack Jamaa and take over again and again. This time they decided to come in by sea. They rented a ship, hired someone to be a captain, and put a plaque with a picture of a phantom on the ship. The phantoms went into Crystal Reef and tired the ship to the dock. The phantoms formulated a plan and set to work. Some phantoms went to try and find Shadow Clan. After a long search they found the clan. Inside with clan was tons of animals that wanted revenge. Those revenge-seeking animals were chosen to help with the invading of Jamaa. The phantoms led the shadow clan members back to their ship. By the time they got back most of the phantoms were in groups ready to go to The Jamaa Township. The leader phantom named Switch told the clan members to run into the township like normal people and steel tons of treasure and gems. They agreed to do the task and they out on swords, nothing to much, just something that normal clan members might wear. Meanwhile, news of the phantoms was beeping spread around Jamaa. Citizens of Jamaot prepared for the phantoms
ReplyDeleteThe giveaway isn't really fair to those who don't have YouTube accounts. My parents don't let me. Please change this SnowyClaw!
ReplyDeleteSorry I had to cut off for a sec.. Now continued.....
ReplyDeleteThe citizens of Jamaa prepared for the phantoms. From Appondale to Coral Canyons citizens stood protecting their country. They didn't know that shadow clanners were stealing gems from people. Jammasian ships surrounded Jamaa's waters. The shadow clanners came back with tons of treasure and gems. They went back onto the ship and his it. That was when the phantoms left the ship and headed straight towards The Township. When they were dircectly above The Township Switch did a sharp turn and was headed in the direction of The Lost Temple of Zios. Switch dived at the worn down statue of Zios. For underneath was the greatest Jamaasian Treasure of all time. The phantoms went under the statue only to find an army of Tigers. The dodged the tigers and took all the treasure that they could carry. The phantoms knew that some phantoms did not make it out for the roar of the tigers and the horrifying scream of the phantom. When the phantoms returned to their ship they found that the captain moved it. But it was to late for the phantoms. The citizens of Jamaa were all ready after the ship. The first ship, called The Shiveer put a cannon into the side of the phantoms ship, sinking it. No land animal was brave enough to dive into the ship and get the treasure back. The ocean animals are not yet ready to take the treasure back to land, for they are afraid it might cause something bad to happen again. 100 years later a great mountain was discovered above Appondale. The mountain was named after the great ship, Shiveer. The spirit of the phantoms that risked their lives to get the treasure under Zios' statute is said to still be there. Legend says that if you sleep by the statue the phantoms spirits come to life. Today, we know that is true. Now, the small war that is not mentioned anymore was called The Shiveer War. Nobody knows why the war and the mountain was named after the ship, Shiveer but that is the way it is and forever will be.
The End
~ Arctic33
Wow people are writing whole novels over here. XD
ReplyDeleteMine had a few spelling errors! Sorry about that.. I love self correct... I love self correct....
ReplyDeleteHere I go! I might have to stop if I run out of time.
ReplyDeleteMany years ago, phantoms terrorized the seas like little pirates. They robbed many ships, but animals would fight them, just like our loyal alphas would. Sometimes, it would lead to broken masses, or worse, shipwrecks. This is the story, of the most famous wreck in the phantom history.
"Hurry up, my little servants. The animals won't suspect us until sundown. Just think of their " poor " little faces when they see us!" King Phantom boomed. Grunting, the little phantoms hauled cannons on to the ship. Bright black flags flew in the wind. The ship was painted in a frightening shade of brown. The ship, also known as the Sea Serpent, was docked in the cold harbor. After the phantom warriors climbed on, King Phantom proudly lifted the anchor and wished them good luck. The Sea Serpent floated away, powered by a cold wind.
After many days at sea, a happy screech called from the crow's nest." Land Ho!" a phantom cried. Warriors grabbed each other and trot-danced happily on the deck. "Don't celebrate so soon," the commander remarked. "We still have that ship to defeat." He pointed at the horizon and gestured with his tentacles when a ship emerged from the fog.
"Are we there yet?" Peck moaned for the hundredth time on the patrol. "Once you stop groaning, the exciting part will come. I can see a figure in the seas!" Sir Gilbert rasped. Peck put her paw near her mouth and stared innocently into the tiger's emerald eyes." Oh look," Amelia murmured. "A day at sea does one's good!" LaSalle, the raccoon alpha squeaked." But what exactly IS that thing?" Greely pondered. "Fire!" a shrill voice called out. The cannons aimed towards the animals. "Phantoms! We are under attack!" Liza shouted.
Ok I'm running outta time. I'll write soon! ~sheep90882
Peck hopped to the weapon cabin. Gulping air, she furiously searched in the "very important weapon" pile. "Hmm! Graham's toolbox, Liza's staff, Cosmo's first-aid kit, Sophia's lasso.... And aha!" Peck gasped. She held up a silver paintbrush. "A very trusty weapon for a very artistic rabbit!" Peck boasted. She dipped her rare paintbrush into a vat of pink paint and pressed a hidden button. Crimson-colored paint bursted out. "Mmh, it darkened over the years but who cares!" she mumbled. Without hesitating, Peck leaped out of the cabin.
ReplyDelete"Fight, you cowards! Fight!" Commander Phantom demanded. Several warriors and generals hoisted shadow bombs into the cannons. Shadow bombs were powerful bombs that exploded into darkness, ash, and acid. General Phantom struck a match and lit the cannon. Bang! Boom! Splash! The cannon fell into empty water. The two ships floated closer than before. Commander Phantom choked back the horror. It was the alphas! "Uh! Not YOU creatures again!" he scoffed. "Well, you are a creature!" came a soft bellow. To the alphas' astonishment, it was little Peck cursing the phantoms!
"Stop it Peck, you'll get hurt!" Marco warned. He waddled cautiously to the starboard (which is, by the way, the ship's right side) and looked at Peck with worried eyes. "Enough of this goodbye talk! Fire at that stupid rodent!" Commander commanded. Peck was infuriated. How dare that phantom called her a "stupid rodent!" A shadow bomb raced towards Peck. But it was too late. Poor Peck was knocked off the starboard. Her eyes were still and her body was badly wounded. A giant wave drenched the ship. Peck's body plunged helplessly into the deep cove.
Harper and Marco dove into the water. They saw a little silhouette sinking into the trench. "She's drowning! Hurry!" Harper barked. The two saw a bomb enter the water in an amazing speed and noise. They dodged and thrashed wildly in the current. "Peck! We need to save her!" Marco coughed. Soon, Peck was visible. She was carried by the water alphas to the surface. She was hauled on to the deck. Her eyes fluttered open, but they were dull, like clouds in the distance.
A mixture of herbs and medicine poured into Peck's mouth. She gasped and blinked a few times. Her paws were bandaged and her bruises were treated. Cosmo smiled and told her that the war was getting worse. By her side, the tired bodies of Ruby, Greely, and Liza stared into the sky. Peck stood up. She was ready to challenge the phantoms.
"Fight if you can, you meanies!" Peck stuck her tongue out at the rival ship. "Well, if it isn't "Peckerina" the injured rodent!" General teased. Phantoms aimed crossbows at her. Peck, unafraid to fight, pointed her silver paintbrush at the phantoms. She had mixed her paint with sharp debris and lightning powder, a natural substance with a big shock. "Ha! With that thing? What are you going to do with it? Throw it?" a phantom laughed. Peck pressed the button and paint hurled at the whole ship. Lightning powder unleashed its power and made the ship explode. Peck stared at the ship, but it sank like a rock.
In the horizon, the sun had set. Peck was granted a wish, and she received a platinum (white gold) paintbrush. Her silver brush is on display at the museum. During the sunset, a little bird flew across the scene. "A dove! Peck gasped. "Tomorrow will be a day of peace."
-The End-
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This is The best story eva!
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Yea, I know, right? This ought to be the read-aloud story thing!
DeleteI wanna write a story just as good!
DeleteMe to! I'm sheep 90882's number 1 fan!
DeleteHmmph! This story is action-packed and fun!
DeleteI hope Peck gets the day of peace
DeleteA-ha! Caught you red-handed, sheep90882! >:)
DeleteAnyone else notice something a little FISHY about the comments to her story?
-They're all anonymous comments! The means anyone could have wrote them, including the author trying (and failing) to cover up fake complements.
-Even more proof: Notice the first reply is only 1 minute from the last part of the story. The next one is 2 minutes from the first reply, the 3rd is a minute from the 2nd, and so on. Get my point? They were all posted between 30-38 minutes, each about a minute apart. Duh! Fake!
...Replying on your own story so that people like me reading the comments will think other people like your story! Ha! That's plain out-right ridiculous!
It's obvious you didn't put much effort into your feeble attempts of making others think others like your story. Sure, it was good, I can say that, but THIS? No, not good, not good at all. Flybrained, if you ask me. I hope you read this comment.
People might hate... okay, hate's a strong word... people might not like you if you express your opinion like that. Sure, they might be flybrained, and sure, might be right. Yes, that's your opinion. but please be a bit more respectful when expressing it!!!
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OKAY. Here I go.
ReplyDeleteA long time ago, before even the Beta times, when Jamaa was still being created, Mira had just picked out the Alphas from the animals. Their first act as a group was to build a ship -- a wonderful ship, and they named it the Jamaa Spirit. The Jamaa Spirit was the strongest, biggest ship to sail the seven seas. It had ten inches of the strongest wood for walls instead of five inches, ten cannons per side instead of seven, and thanks to Graham, there weren't any oars or sails, just an engine down below that neve developed a fault. The Jamaa Spirit held records of Jamaa's history, rooms upon rooms with books and artifacts, including Peck's silver brush, (I hope you don't mind, sheep908821), as well as many spare rooms for history to come -- future battles, victories to come, and future enemies -- the phantoms.
The phantoms had only just appeared in the land. They decided that if the Jamaasians have a mega ship, why can't they? So they built their own ship -- just as big and tough as the Jamaa Spirit, only with none of the history - the phantoms were too dark to see any of that. They only cared about causing misery, the only emotion they feel is hate.
The phantoms hated the Jamaasians and the Alphas so much, that they immediately went into battle. The reward for finding the wildlife in Kani Kove -- the battleground -- is a miniature replica of the hideous battle that followed.
The phantoms eventually took over the Jamaa Spirit, and made their mark in the back, assuming they would become permanent in Jamaa's history, always there to cause misery to the Jamaasians. But they hadn't counted on Sir Gilbert, the strategist.
He came up with a plan the phantoms wouldn't have a clue of.
TBC
He decided that (nearly) all the alphas would ask the phantoms for a time to repair the damage the phantoms had caused, and resume the fighting later.
ReplyDeleteWhile the phantoms were distracted, Graham and Greely -- the best alphas at sneaking and gadgets engineering -- would creep onto the ship and wreck something important in the ship, the Darkness. The Phantoms would hopefully abandon ship and leave the Alphas to drown with the ship -- not suspecting Graham and Greely setting things right once the phantoms had gone. The plan proved successful, and the Alphas soon had control of the Darkness. They battled with the Phantoms once again, only even though they had the winning ship, they were losing again. Peck couldn't bear this, so she siezed her chance with both paws. She grabbed the wheel of the ship and drove it into the side of the Jamaa Spirit, breaking the hull of both ships open as she did so. (the hull is the almondy-shaped bit that rests on the water)
The Alphas made a raft from the driftwood that was once a phantom ship. Nothing had survived of the Darkness, save this raft. And the other ship...
Liza looked out to see the silhouette of the Jamaa Spirit sinking into the depths of Kani Kove, the phantoms' mark on the back clearly visible. A tear came into her eye. "There goes our history.." she said, her voice shaky. Peck hopped up. "We're Jamaasians. We're animals that remember." she said confidently.
(I hope nobody minds me quoting Snowy.)
The phantoms also made a raft from their ship's driftwood, and they managed to hide in the Temple of Zios, away from prying Alpha eyes, guarding the most important of the Jamaasian artifacts, whithout which, Jamaasian history would fade away, and the phantoms would materialize in it's place, all over Jamaa.
We must hold the phantoms back.
We must remember.
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