Hey jammers! That silly sleep function took over again, lo siento. ^.^ Anywho, today's new item is present in the Jam Mart Furniture shop as the lovely Cosmo Tiki Statue (land edition). Looky here!
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| Taken on a storage with a phone – no panicking. |
Besides the fact that he looks slightly uncomfortable, I'd say Cosmo's a good addition to the collection (at least his name isn't misspelled this time...). Anywho, on to hilarious AJHQ mistakes...
Thank you Axeil for the items and pointing this out. See something wrong with this picture? No? Look closer... CHETAH! *cough* AJHQ *cough* USE *cough* SPELLCHECK *cough* PLZ *facepaw*
Thank you Axeil for the items and pointing this out. See something wrong with this picture? No? Look closer... CHETAH! *cough* AJHQ *cough* USE *cough* SPELLCHECK *cough* PLZ *facepaw*
Also, many jammers have been experiencing wardrobe malfunctions when it comes to back items. As you can see...
Thanks for sending these in cindychen7! I hope your wardrobe was able to sort itself out. Lastly, for today, art!
The one thing I'd wish AJHQ would do, is write these posts from the perspective of the alpha. I think that'd add so much character to the posts of the Daily Explorer. Just a funny idea. Happy jamming!
firsdt!!
ReplyDeleteCongrats! :3
Delete*Gives you some mangos*
Fruits are good for you, plus they're my favorite type. :D
Ilovecutechihuahuas
YARG!!!!
DeleteHOW. DARE. NEW. PERSON. TO. BLOG. BE FIRST!!!!??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
oh eternal woo have to be nwice! :D
Delete@ Eternal:
DeleteHonestly, I don't know what to say about this topic anymore. Stop yelling at the person who got 1st because you didn't get 1st today! Moving on now. Kk? Kk.
@ Nina: Hai. :3
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CONGRATS on 1st! XD such a great acrostic, right guys? ikr.
-LE HULK PUNCHES ETERNAL NN- NO.
DeleteYELLING.
-Picks up The Wolverine and throws it at him nn- RAGE >:U
Congrats!
DeleteOK NOBUDEH TAKE MEH NEW PHRASE.... GAR! -That's me when I'm mad >:3-
DeleteETERNAL YOU NEVER GOT IN LE PURPLE CHEVY!! GAR! GAR GAR GAR! :Smashes le purple chevy:
@Edenkub Eternal no like purple >:U
Delete@Cutepups You know im only joking :I Besides Eternal no like people taking him serious >:U Nu nu no naughty naught!
@Loki ETERNAL ISH YV QIV EQIUBNEQBEWLFJB NODAIN JZ WKDAJ QEOV E2UV SODA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I feel so eternal now :D
I agree cutepups, not to pick on you eternal but I think you guys should all be a little bit... More mature when it comes to first comments and such. Congrats is really all you need to say. ^_^
DeleteOh I didn't see your reply there eternal. Oops sorry
Deletelol jokes. such fun. :P
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Whew. Brain workout.
BLING US GUNNA INVADEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE DIS BLOG FOR ETERRRRNITYYYYYY
Deleteanimaljamsapphire.blogspot.com Check it out <---
-le grabs Wolverine back and away from Eternal and whispers- Stay away from the weird sugar-high commenter...
DeleteLet me instead introduce you to Cutepups..
-scoots toward Cutepups uncertainly-
Guys, it doesn't matter if your first or last, it just matters that Snowy gets the comments. Geez.
Delete-58spots
Congratulations! :D
Delete@58spots,
You're right, it doesn't. But it's a fun game peeps like to play. ^.^
I agree on that, too. Commenting what number you are is pretty fun :3
DeleteOur comments can be funny and sad, but yes they have to make sense, and not be waaaay too immature.
Ilovecutechihuahuas
-sees Wolvie (Loki) behind shoulder-
DeleteOh, uh................
SUP WOLVIE!! XP
*my friend and I have this thing where when we see each other, we say to each other: Sup (name). lol.
LOL first I think
ReplyDeleteYup, you're first!
DeleteCONGRATS AGAIN :D
DeleteDefiantly first.
Ilovecutechihuahuas
YARG.....BURGIN.....TOYOTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteYOU ISH SECOND NOW!!!!!!!
Chihuahuas..
DeleteDefiantly or definitely? I always seem to notice people mix that up sometimes owo
-le slaps eternal with a toy yoda- See what I did there? I Star Warsed it? Even though I know absolutely nothing about Star Wars XD owo
Baddum Crasssssssssh ;3;
DeleteNo one gets my (though lame) Star Wars joke T.T
heh... i thought it wuz pretty funny :3
Deleterubyantoinette
I was too lazy to go search up how to spell it right, Loki. :3
DeleteOMG! I just realized I've been replaying my favorite song 15 times. I LOVE THIS SONG SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >:D
How many inches in a mile, what it takes to make you smile, blah blah blah blah
IT HAS TO BE DEFINITELY!
Ilovecutechihuahuas
Congrats, yet again! ^.^
Delete3rd
ReplyDeleteCongrats! You're really the second commenter, and third comment :)
DeleteCongrats!
DeleteNina's comments were made at the same time, so both of her comments count as first. So you're second ^_^
Ilovecutechihuahuas
Oops, chihuahuas is right, you're second :)
DeleteCongratulations on well-earned second! ^.^
DeleteSecond?! THIS IS THE FIRST TIME OMG :O! And congrats Nina :)
ReplyDeleteI like the new tikis, I think they might go well in the water slide den!
Funny glitch too! Keep it up guys!
-Violet0917
Thanks!!
DeleteYea I like the tikis too :)
You actually tied for third :) I like them, but the expression gives me a painful feeling :P
DeleteI agree :)
~Violet0917
DeleteCongrats Violet! Lol, Violet is one of my favorite colors. Third, but it's still a big achievement! Yay!
~Tallstar107
Constipated Cosmo. O-O
Ilovecutechihuahuas
Thanks :)! Lol Tallstar, that's really cool!
Delete-Violet0917
(He really does like constipated o-o)
Violet, sorry for the confusion, you tied for second :)
DeleteLol he does look kind of constipated omg
DeleteCongrats! :D
DeleteFifth!
ReplyDeletePlease check my blog: rainbow000pegasus.wordpress.com
Please sign your user to stop scamming in the petition!
Could have been third if "reply" buttons were used...
DeleteOh well, no use of pouting.
Congrats for 1st and 2nd! 3rd, 4th and yeah... every Jammer who's comments are off down there. Doesn't mean if you're not in Top 5 or 10, doesn't mean in sucks and all, but, yeah, you get my point, right?
Nobody really counts the replies. ;) For example: If no one had claimed first, and there was 20 or so comments, I could still CLAIM first. XD
DeleteCongrats! Actually fourth, so great job! :)
DeleteI'll be joining. I dislike what scammers and hackers do, they hack/scam innocent jammers! :(
Ilovecutechihuahuas
I can't join. I just noticed ;-;
DeleteIt needs my email to comment. Which I don't have one. :C
Ilovecutechihuahuas
Acutally, you are third, since both Nina's comments were at the same time, and Ecpg and Violet's comments were at the same time :) Congrats!
Deletehi
DeleteCongrats!
Delete5th! ^ You're fourth! ^
ReplyDeleteI would've been first, but I am on my iPod, and the Comment thing, wouldn't let me comment! Gah. Oh well, congrats to you guys! ^.^ I actually don't really care much about what number commenter I am, but, it's fun to be at the very top sometimes. ;)
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I simply love it when AJHQ makes mistakes. >.< I know, I'm heartless! ;-) They are always SO funny! Yeah snowy! *cough* AJHQ *cough* USE *cough* SPELLCHECK *cough* PLZ *facepaw*
Hehe. ^.^
>Rainbow<
Actually, I believe you are fifth commenter, and sixth comment :) And I know how ya feel, I hate when I'm on mobile and am trying to get first comment :P
DeleteXD The arrows on the side of the ^You're Fourth^ was for the person above me. :P
DeleteI would've been second but my phone is glitchy o^o
DeleteOops, nvm, you are fifth comment :P
DeleteAh, I am so confused! I think you are actually fourth, since the first two comments and and the third and fourth were at the same time :)
DeleteOoooh. Hehe :P
DeleteSuPeRfRaGuLiStIcExPeAlEdOsIs. XDDD I highly doubt I spelled that right.
DeleteBored..Ooohhh hey! Lunch time! Who DOESN'T love LUNCH time?! Hehe.
@ Rainbowcat1 It is spelled supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
Delete~hurricane100
Lolz. Thanks. :P
Deleteikr? You'd think grown-ups would use spellcheck... o.o
DeleteMaybe they think we wouldn't notice? And also, congrats! ^.^
Oh my zIos! I've never seen AJHQ have a typo before, except "Costmo
ReplyDeleteI've seen them have bad grammar sometimes on the Daily Explorer :P
DeleteFor the jamagrams, 'Sneaky as a tiger' should be 'Sneaky as a fox'. Doesn't it make more sense to you guys?
DeleteIlovecutechihuahuas
Also, I see the New's Crew reports with bad grammer.
DeleteChihuahuas, I agree. I usually think of tigers as more ferocious than sneaky.
DeleteJammer, I agree, some News Crew reports do have bad grammar. However, the News Crew reports aren't written by AJHQ :)
Yus. Me too. ;)
DeleteWell, I guess it's understandable for them to make typos. They'll probably fix them someday, so be sure to send yourselves some exclusive typo'd jamagrams today! :'D
DeleteWhoa, thanks for the great post Snowy! My favorite art is the seahorse one. :3
ReplyDeleteDuchess, that one is pretty neat. My favorite is the seal :)
DeleteI like the seal too! c:
DeleteIlovecutechihuahuas
I like all the drawings! Congrats tot the drawers. :)
DeleteThey were very lucky! All of them got awesome plaques... ;u;
DeleteDoes anyone have all of the plaques?
9th???
ReplyDelete~diamond147
WAIT! I JUST FIGURED OUT SOMETHING SOOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! 3 TIMES 3 EQUALS 9!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteYup! Congrats :3
DeleteLol, Eternal xD
Ilovecutechihuahuas
OMG ETERNAL!!!
DeleteI FOUND SOME THING EVER MORE AMAZING!!!!!
DID YOU KNOW WE ARE HUMANS?!?!?!?!? *gasps*
OMGGGGG, HUMANNNNNNNNNNNNNN POWAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
~diamond147
OH MY GAWD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I DIDN'T KNOW THAT!!! I ACTUALLY THOUGHT I WAS A DONUT!!!!!!!! WHAT ELSE IS SO AMAZING TO KNOW??!!!!
DeleteI thought I was Asgardian.. or a mutant...
Delete-sobs and flips fridge in despair-
I just found this out, too. HUMANS BREATHE AIR. WHOA.
DeleteHEY. DID CHA KNOW DAT 3 TIMES (negative) 3 EQUALS (negative) 9. OR DAT (negative) 3 TIMES (negative) 3 EQUALS 3.???? >:P ERMAGOSH 3 STOP BEING SO NEGATIVE!! GEEZAS. OR HOW 'BOUT 3 IS LIKE THE 1ST NUMERO IN PI OR DAT x3 IS CUBED.????
DeleteO-O Wait.... why am I commenting about math. I don't even like math. owo
So did cha know dat: ABCDEFGHIJKLMONOPQRSTUVWXYZ is le alphabet and its a word according to spell-check on the comment thing.??? It is.
~thejamaamist.blogspot.com~ ;)
Diamond, you are really seventh. What, what? We are humans? No! You just ruined my dreams of being a cat.... :p
Delete@ Tallstar107:
Delete^o^ Le gasp. I have friends who think they are cats (they are actually humans). =^.^= MEOWZAS
~thejamaamist.blogspot.com~ heh heh. >:3
I WANNA BE ASGARDIAN OR A MUTAAAANT!
Delete-wails and screeches unearthily-
I found something AWESOME!!!Did you know 1 + 1 = 2.!!!
Delete~hurricane100
OMG Did I really just say that negative 3 times negative 3 equals 3 ??
Delete-facepalm-
I meant to say that negative 3 times negative 3 equals 9
Whoops sorry about that, guys!
GUESS WHAT!!! A IS THE FIRST LETTER OF THE ALPHABET!!!.
DeleteOMG A IS THE FIRST LETTER IN THE WORD ALPHABET AND THE ALPHABET ITSELF!!! COINCIDENCE!??!?!? I THINK NOOOT!!!
DeleteAJHQ really seems to be slaking off when it comes to spellcheck.
ReplyDelete*Liza* Allright AJHQ newbies, lets learn how to spell "Chettah"!
C as in car
H as in heart
E as in elephant
T as in time
(another) T as in time
A as in apple
And finally,
H as in heart!
*Liza* Now you try
*AJHQ* Chetah
*Liza * *facepaw*
Actually, just so you know, it's 2 e's and 2 t's. C-h-e-e-t-a-h.
Delete:)
Oops! Sorry I meant, 1 t. Lolz.
DeleteOpps, my mistake! IT was early in the morning! Lolz
DeleteAnonymous, lol!
DeleteLesson 1:
Teach AJHQ to spell cheetah
Lesson 2:
Teach AJHQ to spell cheetah
Lesson 3:
Teach AJHQ to spell cheetah (Liza's patience is running out)
Lesson 4:
Teach AJHQ to spell cheetah (Most students have graduated by now!)
And so on :P
Aw poor AJHQ. At least they fix the mistakes eventually!
DeleteLOL!
DeleteA little story here. o3o
Liza rushed towards Mira's den. "MIRA, HUMANS HAVE BROUGHT DISGRACE TO CHEETAHS!" Liza yelled. "BANISH THEM FROM THE JAMAA, THEY BRAINWASHED ALL ANIMALS! "Quiet Liza! I'm concentrating on forming a Cosmo Tiki Statue". "They even think I'm constipated! :'C ". "Chill Liza, I have a surprise for all the Alphas......"
"Making them all CONSTIPATED LOOKING! YAY!!!!!!!!"
Just a short story. XD
Ilovecutechihuahuas
It's ok, AJHQ someday you will learn! :'D
DeleteTell me why all the Alphas look constipated..
ReplyDeleteDo they need a toilet?
Do they have (look away from this comment children) diarreah? -shudders in disgust-
~kiki51772 peace <3 spiders~
-Shudders with mystery- I guess this is a time for...MYTHY MYSTERY INK!!!! DA DA DOO!
DeleteOn Mythy mystery's first day for his mystery he tries to figure out why the alphas look so constipated....While he looks around for clues he interviews jammers with 5 inch eyebrows along the way...''Well, I think the alphas look so constipated because they needed to do diarreah OR needed some shaving!'' said first interview by kiki51772...But still, Mythy Mystery did NOT find any answers...As he traveled to New yorky porkies, he saw a VERY weird person....As he walked up onto the VERY weird person he asked if he ever knew about the constipated alphas....The VERY weird person said ''Heh! Constipated alphas yu say?? I know i seem very constipated- ERR I MEAN I KNOW I look VERY weird but i know something even VERY more weirderner! But yu gotta listen! One time, I was doing diarrhea on my toilet but it NEVER came out! I wus like, OMG! THIS IS SO CONSTIPATED- ERR I MEAN OMG THIS IS SO WEIRD! Then i wus like, OMG! I REALLY NEED A DONUT BEFORE I GO TURNING CIRCLE AGAIN!!!!'' Mythy Mystery stared at this constipated- I MEAN VERY weird person and stared at the person as he rubbed his weird (but handsome) beard. Then stared at the person for 60 more hours....Then Mythy Mystery finally figured about that this was DUN DUN DON: CONSTIPATED COSMO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
To Be Continued.....
Well how do ya guys like it? :D This was the surprise video i was working on but i decided to do a sneak peak for you guys! AND DA VIDEO ISH GONNA BE SOOOO RANDOM OOH AND IT GIVES FREE FLYING POPTART COOKIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DDD
XD
DeleteI wanna be in it! Oh wait, I already am owo
OMG ETERNAL! THAT STORY IS SO BEAUTIFUL!! PLEASE CNTINUE THIS MASTERPIECE!! RATES IT 5 OUT OF 5 STARS! :') -wipes away tears- lol jk I'm not crying. Actually, I think it's the most random story I've ever read. O.O
DeleteBut hey, cool a video! :P
*CONTINUE
DeleteSorry about that typo guys. Ish so sorreh. Pwease forgive mweh. :3
Lol! Dat's hilarious :p
Deleteheh... i think they do, have you ever noticed how on animal jam there are no toilets O.O where do all the animals "go" in the bushes, in thier dens?????????
Deleterubyantoinette
OMG! Awesome story! It made me laugh my head off! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
DeleteBest Constipated Story I've read so far, YES! O3O
Ilovecutechihuahuas
THAT was a weird story. o.o
Delete17th! Or 18th!
ReplyDelete~56yy
I just noticed that! If it wasn't spelled right *cough*.
Delete56yy, you are actually tenth! Congratulations :)
DeleteCongratulations! :D
DeleteThough it would be awesomer if you were 56th. XD
I noticed the "chetah" thing when the Jam-A-Grams came out. I wasn't sure if it was just me or not.... :P
ReplyDeleteThis is why i don't use dictionaries! >:U
DeleteXD
DeleteWouldn't dictionaries help you spell it, Eternal? o^o
And that is why there is Spell Check.
DeleteHEY, BOOK DICTIONARIES CAN CONFUSE MEH, SO I USE: DICTIONARY.COM >:D
DeleteAbout what FactoryDash said, there's also another HQ typo via JAGs: ARTIC WOLF. LOT of peeps know about this one, though. Artic wolf really annoys me for some reason because just no. Its arctic not artic. Silly AJHQ. :P
Oh yeah, there also was Costmo on the underwater Cosmo freaky tiki. XD
Ya know, da thing I don't get about dictionaries is that if you want to spell something, you don't know how to find it! It's in alphabetical order, and if you can't spell, you can't find it... See, I just use spell check or start Googling it if I think I'm pretty close :P
DeleteThe good thing about computers is that they conveniently underline misspelled words with a squiggly red line. :D
Delete>:I That red line annoys me- especially when I typed that word correctly! I hope it's not only me....
DeleteVisit my blog!
ReplyDeletehttp://animaljameverylittlething.blogspot.com/
I visited and commented on your blog.
DeletePawsome profile pic too btw.
Okie doki loki ^.^
DeleteI never noticed the cheetah thing, I never really look at the jam-a-grams!!
ReplyDeleteMe neither. o.o
DeletePlease check out my blog:
ReplyDeleteanimaljamopal.blogspot.com
If you have any tips, please let me know :) Thanks!
Totally! ^.^
DeleteI think im getting sick. lol but as long as you guys posti feel o for the day> pinkjay2
ReplyDeleteOH NO....*Le gasp* AJHQ HAS STRIKED ON MESSING UP WORDS!!! RUN BEFORE THINGS GET VERRRY UGLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SCRREEEECH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Delete...? I don't get either of your guys's comments... o.o
Delete@ Shadow:
Delete(if you're commenting about Eternal)
Honestly, who does? Who actually gets and understand the craziness? But anyway, LOL. ^^
10 :D First double digit, yeah baby!!
ReplyDeleteBecause nobody called it. B) Anyway. Main comment now. Shame, AJHQ, shame. You have us on bubble chat, so we don't misspell anything, yet you turn around and misspell cheetah. Shame. o^o
DeleteEXACTLY LOLOL
DeleteSilly AJHQ
ReplyDeleteWHO'S A SILLY HQ?
DeleteYOU'RE A SILLY HQ?
WHO IS?
YOU IS, AJHQ?
(Kinda actually fits because they have the same beginning initials as Applejack.. lol)
Anyone get the reference? ;_;
Snowy, why does the Cosmo Tiki Statue cost 500.00 gems for you? When I clicked it, it was the normal price of 500 O-O
ReplyDeleteIlovecutechihuahuas
I think you can play in iPads and iPhones and you get a wired thing like 500:00 :3
DeleteWeird. I have never played AJ on a phone. o.o
DeleteDoes anyone want to be my buddy cause I just love having buddy's!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd does Anyone want to trade for.....
Spikey
Pretty
In season
Kool
Empowering
Nat95201
What's "Empowering?" XD
DeleteDo you name all your items or something? lol
Did anyone realize cats stands for...
ReplyDeleteConstipated
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Statues
Ilovecutechihuahuas XD
XD I luv that acrostic! Read the first comment ^^ for mine. 8D
DeleteOh my! -Falls on the ground laughing-
DeleteEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
DeleteAJHQ <3's cats, Mrrrow! X3
LOL yours is brilliant!
Ilovecutechihuahuas
OMG CATS ARE TAKING OVER THE WORLLLD (both kinds... xc)
DeleteWho do you never play cards with?
ReplyDeleteA chetah!
Get it? Haha, ha...
*crickets chirp*
Lol.
DeleteI heard a joke like that before, but instead of playing cards, it's about taking a test. Ah in kindergarten, like ages ago.
Why can't you play poker in the jungle?
DeleteBecause there are too many CHETAHS! Hehe.
Feel da burn, AJHQ! :O
I remember that joke! It was pretty much easy to solve, but still. It's le perfect joke :3
Delete*Crickets start applauding*
NOTICE ME IN THE CROWD! I'm the cricket with a mustache o3o.
Ilovecutechihuahuas
Chetahs? I don't get it..
DeleteChetahs. What's a "chetah?" I don't know what a CHETAH is!!! THE COMPUTER IS UNDERLINING IT WITH A RED LINE THAT CAN'T BE GOOD!!
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Hey jammers! I've decided to write a story! (Not a fanfic, please not that.)
ReplyDeleteCutepups, if you see this, I need to let you know that I liked your idea of the tribes, (animals split) from your Twinkle story, and I wanna use that, but I will NOT use Twinkle, Duke, or any of your characters. Thank you!
Wolvie lept ahead, trying to catch up to the small group heading to the Grand Meeting, the one peaceful time when the tribes meet. Her icy-blue fur whipped behind her as she skidded to a halt next to Naffy, her good friend.
"It's such an honor to get chosen to go to the Grand Meeting! The group leaders only choose the BEST of their pack!" Wolvie's pretty seafoam eyes shone brightly.
"I know, Wolvie, you've told me a million times.... since this morning." Naffy snorted.
"Laugh all you want, it's true!" Wolvie said indignantly.
"I know, I know, I'm just messing with you," Naffy said apologetically.
"Is Balaur coming?" Naffy continued.
"Um.. I'm not sure, let me check," Wolvie said, preparing to dash off.
"Don't run into anybody, Wolvie!" Naffy called after her as she lept ahead to check for their other friends.
Wolvie nearly slammed into a tree as she whipped around, checking for Balaur. Almost immediately she sighted her friend, toward the front of the group. She raced to her brown-furred friend, eyes glittering in the pale moonlight.
"Balaur!" Wolvie called, slowing as she paced next to her friend.
"Me and Naffy were looking for you, Balaur, why didn't you come walk with us?" Wolvie questioned.
"Oh, I didn't know Naffy came, can she come up here with us?" Balaur replied, obviously intrigued.
"Sure, I'll go get her," Wolvie said, but sighed as she turned around, her energy was dimming. She was about to run off, but a familiar bark hit her ears.
"Wolven Pack, we are here!" The leader, Simone, stated, his head and tail held high as he walked into the clearing, where the rest of the tribes had grouped around the Mira Statue.
"I will sit you accordingly, there will be no talking when the meeting begins." Simone commanded.
"Balaur, Naffy and Wolverine, here!" Wolvie sighed. She HATED it when they used her full name. She was upset by the fact her mother was such a ding-dong that she named Wolvie after another animal.
"Oh well, maybe Simone will get it right next time," Naffy said, guiding Wolvie to their seats around the statue.
"Maybe," Wolvie said, but perked up when she heard the opening saying.
"Mother Mira, guide us in our troubles, and lead us in our blessings."
To be continued! :D
1. I do see this (also on yesterday's post) lol. :)
Delete2. Aww thank you! (wait, do I call you Loki or Wolvie now?)
3. Interesting story! I like it. c:
~cutepups522~
WOLVIE!
DeleteI haz a new waifu..
-huggles Loki, Wolverine (Logan, Wolvie) and Captain America in one huge squeeze of death- <3333
Ok so Wolvie. Kk. ^.^
DeleteWolvie stayed very still, straightening her tail behind her as she watched the trible leaders report their news and blessings and problems to Mira.
Delete"Hey.. Wolvie, looks like Simone is about to explode waiting for his turn.. I wonder what's on his mind.." Balaur said, and, as Wolvie took a closer look, he DID look like he was going to explode trying to keep his posture. Wolvie snorted quietly.
"Do the group members get to go up too?" Naffy asked, watching the statue with unblinking eyes.
"Um.. I think AFTER the leaders report, then we get to go up," Balaur responded, turning her head to look at them.
"Will you two be quiet, I'm trying to watch!" Wolvie hissed under her breath, her gasp turning into frost.
"Um.. I can see my breath.. But it's not winter.. is this natural?" Wolvie asked, fear now striking in her eyes.
"Um... I'm not su--" Balaur began, but was interrupted by a screech.
"THE PHANTOMS! THE PHANTOMS ARE BACK!!"
Whenever I see the name Simone I always think of Alvin and the chipmunks. Lololololo! You're a good story writer though, I'm still trying my best to learn more English words that are good for a detailed story. :D
DeleteIlovecutechihuahuas
I love your descriptiveness!!! Really interesting :D
DeleteIt's... it's... PAWSOME!!! :3
DeleteGo away spambot! -hits with flyswatter- LEAVE! >:U
ReplyDeleteI think you killed it... XD
DeleteSpambot: *twitches*
@ Rainbow: Our replies to that spambot are now just random comments... XD
Delete@ Shadow: Haha, there used to be this spambot commenting about bankruptcy (ah, something bank-like that's illegal), lawyers, and attorneys. It freaked me out when I first read it because I'm learning about lawyers/attorneys a bit in my Social Studies class. XD
PS: I never knew until today that a spambot is now a fly or another type of insect. How 'bout bringing in some insecticide when you're at it, Rainbow.? XD
Also, next time you comment your spambot stuff, USE PROPER GRAMMER!
ReplyDeleteHeh heh. :Y
nooo i wuz logged out for... UDATE
ReplyDeleteXD Rainbow, you go tell that spambot! >:L
ReplyDeletePS: Weird. I'm kinda learning about attorneys/lawyers in my Social Studies class. o-o
ANIMAL JAM'S OFFLINE. PEOPLE SAY THERE'S A GLITCH THAT IF YOU LOGGED OFF OR REFRESHED YOU GOT BANNED, AND I'VE HEARD PROOF, THOUGH I DUNNO IF IT'S TRUE. APPARENTLY THAT'S WHAT AJHQ IS FIXING. LOL, AS ETERNAL WOULD SAY, I THINK I BROKE THE CAPS KEY.
ReplyDeleteUgh. I wanna get on AJ so bad ;-;
DeleteIs is true!!?!?!?/!/!? I'M GOING TO EXPLODE IF IT IS! I just refreshed and logged off a bunch of times. I'm fine with suspended for a few days, but BANNED!? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. I have better friends on AJ than I do in real life, I don't even have a real bff! Only in AJ. :'C
Ilovecutechihuahuas
ME AND MY FRIENDS HAD A HUGE COUNTDOWN PARTY FOR THE UPDATE.. AND WE COUNTED DOWN FROM THE LAST MINUTE.. AND WE KEPT MISSING IT OWO
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ReplyDeleteim so bored aj is offline
ReplyDeletei was playing earlier, but it was really glitchy, i guess they were fixing it
DeleteAJ is working for me now, but all it does is load and load and load! :(
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notice that the price for the cosmo tiki statue said 500.00
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ReplyDeleteThis is probably like my 5th comment since I changed my username \[^-^]/ Creepy sombrero eagle here, AKA TackyTaco. (Sombrero thing is an inside joke with Snowy ;3) I don't have really anything to say about the post except something about the comments- Dear eternalmyth, you are truly bonkers in the brain. ;D
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Aren't we all? XD
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My my. TWO spambot comments in ONE post?! What is this world coming to?! -Kicks spambot off blog- Hehe.
ReplyDeleteBtw spambot, Children. Don't. Own. Cars. >:I
030 It won't let me comment on it. HMPH! And it changed. It used to be some sort of car thingy. :o
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ReplyDeletehi jammers im writing a little story lolz :P
ReplyDeleteit was once a stormy night when beth and lizzy were lost in a haunted mansion BETH exclaimed lizzy how do we get out LIZZY said did u hear that? in a scared voice BETH when behind her sister and yelled out a large BOO she loved to tease her sister as bats flew away her sister lizzy yelled out a big yelp haha I tricked u said beth continuing to find an entrance to the mansion lizzy said beth yes beth said lizzy wait is it scary said lizzy to her older sister no said beth remember when u got stuck in a fish net oh yeah said lizzy the 2 sisters kept on searching for the missing entrance wait tomorrow for part 2 to arrive THE ENTRANCE happy jamming
Huh. That story (I think) is great for the Night of the Phantoms/Halloween. Nice story too btw. ^-^
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Deletehey u are now able to see my part 2 I reed this to my class and they loved it lolly2014
Deletek so this is my other part 2 little story btw my aj user is lolly2014
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lizzy lizzy I found it you did beth im so glad a few minutes later the 2 sisters try to remove the bolder blocking the entrance lizzy said did u hear that then beth said duh its a haunted mansion of course were going to hear something lizzy gave up talking and they both pushes the bolder with all their strength then the finally opened it beth was exhausted same with lizzy then the FBI yelled out ghosts then yelled beth were not ghosts so the FBI took them to their lab help help were being kidnaped by the FBI said lizzy then beth yelled were not being kidnapped whats wrong with you of course were being kidnapped and yet by the FBI!?!?!?! after the arrived onto the lab whats going on their was 50 men with large masks and a weird looking costume saying FBI what is this yelled beth something here is not right they found out they were stuck in that mansion for so long they became ghosts wwwhats going on yelled lizzy she was so scared now I will not spoil it wait intill part 3 THE ESCAPE FROM THE FBI!?!?!?
Wait, wasn't Loki changing his profile to IAmTheWolverineFan? Maybe?
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Hey guys......my friend lost her rare fox hat,non rare bow and arrows,and other stuff I don't know, I'm trying to think that is happy97559 because when I played aj a lot I ate to much sugar and told my pass then all my rares are gone I know rares don't matter but my friend and classmate thinks it matters :U it does it! HOW DO RARES MATTER >:U Okay.... I need to chill o.o.
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ReplyDeleteI think her user is Onedirectionfantwin1 or 2 :P
DeleteHey guys! ^U^
ReplyDeleteLoki's comment on fanfics sparked my memory and I remembered that I wrote a warriors fanfic.
So for all you warriors fans, here's my old DuskClan fanfic <3
(PS: I'm fallenstar :3)
(PPS: PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Read the whole thing! I took a long while on this and I'd be happy if you took the time to read my whole story C;)
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PART 1
DuskClan Cats:
Fallenstar-
A white she cat with ginger patches
Feathertail-
A light brown dappled she cat
Blizzardtail-
A blueish grey she cat, skilled with herbs.
Nightclaw-
A black tom with dark grey stripes
Daisyleaf-
A small cream she cat with lighter patches
Blackfire-
A quiet, dark grey tom with black stripes
Mudfur-
A brown dappled she cat with matted fur, former deputy
Shadowstripe-
A black striped, well muscled tabby tom
Cedarheart-
A quiet, light brown she cat with cedar colored underbelly
Ashpaw-
A grey and black speckled tom
Mistheart-
A misty colored she cat, mentor to Ashpaw.
Gingerpool-
A ginger patched she cat, mentor to Darkpaw
Darkpaw-
A small, black and russet colored apprentice
Rogue and Outside Characters:
Brokentail-
A snooty former clanmate with a kinked tail and dark brown fur.
Moonshade-
A skinny, black she cat with greyish patches and deep blue eyes.
Falconscreech-
A red and brown rogue she cat, fierce fighter.
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Prologue
The ferns shivered as a lithe black cat padded through. In the shadowy clearing, there were two other cats, one a large tabby tom with a kinked tail and the other a young, black and reddish tom. “Good to see you, Moonshade,” meowed the tabby. Moonshade nodded. “And you,” he dipped his head to her. “Are we training yet?” moaned the apprentice. “Shh…” hissed Moonshade. “Someone’s coming.” Darkpaw looked at her, then he noticed the ferns swish behind him.“Hi, Feathertail…” awkwardly meowed the smaller cat. “What are you doing here alone, Darkpaw?” she asked. Darkpaw looked around, realizing he was alone in the clearing. “What are you doing here?” she repeated. Darkpaw didn’t answer. “Uh…” his voice shook. “Lets get you back to camp; its late,” mewed Feathertail. Darkpaw nodded and they padded off together.
Chapter 1
Fallenstar yawned and shook out her pelt. It was moonhigh. When Feathertail sent out the patrols the other day, Ashpaw had been bitten by a snake. They soon discovered there was a whole family of them under a rock in their territory, and Fallenstar couldn’t help worrying about Ashpaw. After all, he was only an apprentice. Fallenstar and Mistheart had to fight the snakes off while Ashpaw was being taken care of off to the side. Fallenstar had twisted her paw and now was resting in her den. The ferns swished as somebody entered her den. “What can I do for you, Ashpaw?” she asked as she stood on three paws. Ashpaw just stood there and looked at her. “Are you alright?” Ashpaw shook his head. “My leg is hurting me,” he moaned. “Go wake up Blizzardtail. She should be able to help.” Fallenstar stretched, then followed Ashpaw out of the den. As they passed the warriors den, Nightclaw raised his head. “Everything alright, Fallenstar?” He asked. “Im fine,” she murmured. “I'm just taking Ashpaw up to the medicine den. His leg is bugging him. “Should I come too? I’m not getting much sleep with these hooligans in the warriors den,” grumbled Nightclaw. Fallenstar’s two closest friends, Stone and Mist had helped the clan recently, so they were staying with the warriors, and apparently quite heavy sleepers. Fallenstar silently laughed to herself as they walked up to the medicine den.
PART 2
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Blizzardtail blinked awake. “What do you want,” she mumbled as she rubbed her eyes. “I…” Ashpaw stuttered. “My leg hurts." Blizardtail got to her feet quickly.”Oh, that. Yeah, ok. Does it sting at all?” she questioned. “I can’t feel it.” Ashpaw moaned. Blizzardtail nodded and got right to work. “Will he be alright?” Nightclaw asked, his head tilted slightly. Blizzardtail nodded. “Then we should go.” Fallenstar turned to her mate and they slowly padded down to the Warriors den. Fallenstar noticed that he had a worried expression on his face. “He is going to be fine, trust me,” she purred. “Get some rest,” she mewed. “Only if i can!” Nightclaw purred and got settled into his nest. “Goodnight!” he called as she padded off to her den. Fallenstar awoke to a yowl. It was strike. Fallenstar stumbled outside of her den, running over to the warriors den. She found Strike, Stone, Cedarheart and Gingerpool all crowding around Blackfire. He was cowering in the corner, yowling about something. Feathertail got up from her place and slowly walked up to Blackfire. “Calm down, what happened?” she asked in a soothing tone. “BROKENTAIL’S BACK!” he screeched. “Brokentail?” Mist asked. “Yes, Brokentail.” spat Stone. “I was in this clan once, and boy do i remember him. Arrogant, sly, and bad tempered,” he grumbled the last part. “Brokentail was a former warrior of mine.” Fallenstar calmly said. Not to mention annoying. “He thought we were ‘weak’ and ‘petty,’ and was constantly trying to tell Fallenstar what to do. Fallenstar turned. Darkpaw was stumbling out of the apprentice den. “My StarClan!” whispered someone. “Has he slept?” I doubt it. Though Fallenstar. Must have been up all night chasing beetles. Ashpaw came down with Blizzardtail and went up to his denmate. “Come with me.” Fallenstar watched the two cats pad off to their den and Blizzardtail watch them with careful eyes. Her gaze locked back onto Blackfire. “Tell me more about… about Brokentail,” she looked at him. Feathertail padded up to her. “I think he just had a bad dream,” she murmured. Fallenstar nodded, but she still wanted to find out more information. She looked around the den. It suddenly seemed more empty. “Did you send out patrols?” she said as she saw Feathertail exiting the den. She nodded. “Stone and Strike left too.” Fallenstar’s gaze flickered over to Blackfire, who was now fast asleep. Bad dream… she thought.
PART 3
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Fallenstar ran. She was out in the marsh, on patrol with Cedarheart, Mudfur, Mistheart, Blackfire and Daisyleaf. “AND STAY OUT!” yowled Mistheart. On the earlier set of patrols, Shadowstripe had found a band of rogues along the riverbank while hunting, one with a broken foot. Fallenstar flicked her tail. she looked back to find Blackfire looking over at a thornbush off in the distance. “Anything wrong?” Daisyleaf was staring at him. He shook his head. “Thought I saw something.” He mumbled. “I might just be crazy though, like you all think i am,” Blackfire’s tail drooped. Daisyleaf padded up to him. “You're not TOTALLY crazy, who knows! Brokentail might still be around.” As if on cue, the bushes rustled and a familiar tom with a kinked tail stepped out. “Brokentail.” Mudfur growled, her eyes locked on him. Fallenstar calmly padded up to him. “Hello, Brokentail.” she hissed. “I told you!” grumbled Blackfire at the back of the crowd. “IM NOT CRAZY!” he hissed to everyone. Brokentail’s eyes narrowed. “And what,” he scowled. “Might your little band of kittypets be doing here?” He’s taunting us! “Excuse ME sir, but this is OUR territory,” said Cedarheart. “And…?” taunted Brokentail. “Do I care?” “You should!” spat Blackfire from somewhere farther away. It seemed like he was slowly inching away from everyone. His expression was suddenly filled with regret. At least he was brave enough to stand up for himself and his clan. Fallenstar padded up to him until she was nose to nose with Brokentail. “This is our territory,” she hissed in his ear “And who exactly made it yours?” he growled. Is he challenging me? His claws unsheathed. Fallenstar’s didn’t. “I’m not up for a fight.” said Fallenstar. Brokentails ears pricked. “So your soft.” he hissed. “You're just a kittypet. Why, your whole clan is in fact! A band of kittypet friends! Hah! Just Admit it and face facts,Fallenstar. Your clan is worthless.” Her whiskers twitched. “This is going to cause unnecessary bloodshed, Brokentail.” aren’t my clanmates going to back me up? she thought. Suddenly, she realized they had left. “Brokentail. I am not going to fight you,” she stood her ground. His eyes narrowed and his tail lashed angrily. “Kittypet.” he hissed. “Go run off before I make you, Fallenstar.”
PART 4 AND 5
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Ashpaw cringed. He had been confined to the camp until his leg healed., all because of the dumb snakes on the marsh.. Blizzardtail said that he had to ‘rest’ and ‘not stretch it’. “Dumb rattlers…” he grumbled. His denmate Darkpaw woke up and pricked his ears “Wha..? Ashpaw did you say something?” he mumbled, rubbing his eyes. As Ashpaw opened his mouth to speak, Gingerpool trotted in. “Training time, Darkpaw!” Darkpaw flicked his tail. “See ya, Ashpaw!” he mewed. Right. See ya. Why can’t I train? He asked himself. Ashpaw rested his head on his paws and fell asleep. The next morning, he found Darkpaw drooling all over his leg, sprawled out of his mossy nest. He slowly pulled his leg out, and then he realized Darkpaw had SCRATCHES on him! Did Gingerpool train him THAT hard?! Ashpaw looked at them closer. They were fresh. Did they do night training? He sniffed his flank. It smelled faintly of DuskClan…and like crowfood. Where had he smelled that before? Then he came to realize: Darkpaw was training with Brokentail. Ashpaw’s eyes widened in fear… Then he ran. “Fallenstar!!!” he screeched. He didn’t care how many cats he woke, this was important.
Chapter 5
Fallenstar’s ears flattened against the shrill cry of a blackbird. Her twisted paw numbly rested on the ground. “Are you sure, Ashpaw?” she questioned him. “How did you tell it was Brokentail?” Daisyleaf nodded. “I could tell too, I caught a whiff of his scent in the forest the other day…” she cringed. “It smelled of him… and also another cat,” Ashpaw growled. “The foul stench of a traitor.” I can’t believe that Brokentail is still after us! Training apprentices, constantly stalking us. What a sick cat. Ashpaw grunted as his semi-healed leg twisted under a long weed. Darkpaw padded through the trees and stopped at the Fresh Kill pile where Fallenstar, Daisyleaf and Ashpaw were sitting. “Hi!” he mewed. Fallenstar could see him flinch as he sat down on his haunches. “Where have you been?” mewed Ashpaw. Was that a hint of a challenge i heard? Darkpaw just stared at him. “Where have you been?” repeated Daisyleaf, narrowing her eyes. “I was night training,” He confessed. Darkpaw hung his head low. “With whom?” Fallenstar asked. “Brokentail” he mumbled. “Speak up.” “Brokentail,” he raised his head high. “He promised to make me a better warrior,” he growled. “Do you not want that?” He growled “Brokentail is evil though.” said Ashpaw. Darkpaw stared at them. “He is?” he said, sounding clueless. “Yes he’s EVIL, mousebrain,” hissed Ashpaw. “We will address this later,” meowed Fallenstar, clearly not wanting to. What am I going to do? she thought. Ashpaw would go on bickering for moons with Darkpaw if I don’t stop them.
PART 6
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Ashpaw stepped outside. It was a cool, foggy morning and his leg was entirely healed. Finally, Blizzardtail will let me train! He couldn’t help but purr. Mistheart came in the den along with Gingerpool. “Ready for partner training?” meowed Mistheart. “Of course!” purred Darkpaw. “Im ready for anything!” he dropped into a battle crouch. Ashpaw nodded and purred, despite his grudge towards Darkpaw. “It’s going to be great to get out of camp!” he mewed. As they came towards the shady training hollow Ashpaw quickened his pace. He felt the stiffness in his leg fade, felt the rush of wind in his face. He bubbled with excitement. Ashpaw stopped and looked up into the trees, admiring them. How i’ve missed you, training hollow! Gingerpool, Darkpaw, and Mistheart padded after him…. and… Nightclaw? Was he going to help train them? Ashpaw stood in the middle of the leaf dappled hollow, jumping from side to side. “Are we going to do battle training?” he asked. Nightclaw, Mistheart and Gingerpool all nodded simultaneously. “Yes!” purred Darkpaw. “Nightclaw is going to show you a new move today,” added Mistheart. “Now watch.” Nightclaw charged towards the apprentices, then suddenly slid on his back and clawed the air above him, pretending it was an enemy warrior or wild animal. “It works well to surprise the enemy. It looks like you're going to try and go for their face, but you dive down and claw their belly instead,” he meowed. Ashpaw’s nodded slowly. “Try it on me,” he motioned for Ashpaw to come closer. He charged. Nightclaw stepped to the side before he could even attempt to attack. “Faster,” he meowed. “Let me try!” mewed Darkpaw. Nightclaw nodded and beckoned him forward. “Go right ahead.” Darkpaw lunged at him, looking like he was just about to land on top of Nightclaw. Nightclaw backed away, but Darkpaw dropped to the ground and slid, pretending to claw Nightclaws belly. Nightclaw stepped back. “Good Work!” he meowed. “You did it perfectly,” he purred. “Ashpaw why not give it another try?” Ashpaw turned around to Mistheart. She nodded. Ashpaw dropped into a crouch, leaped into the air, then dropped to the ground and slid under Nightclaw. “Good!” he looked down at Ashpaw. “You did excellent for your injured leg.”
Ashpaw glanced back to Gingerpool and Darkpaw. He saw him sit there with a bored expression on his face. I bet he would rather be training with Brokentail.
PART 7 AND 8
ReplyDelete“Clan meeting!” yowled Fallenstar. She looked around at her clanmates. “Whats it about?” meowed Mudfur. Daisyleaf shrugged. “Not sure.” Fallenstar looked down at her warriors. “I have heard news that Brokentail has been threatening one of our warriors,” she mewed. Her gaze flickered over to Daisyleaf and Darkpaw. “This is about Brokentail,” she glanced at their shocked faces. “What about him?” growled Shadowstripe. “Yea!” mewed Cedarheart. “Where has he been?” she growled. She glanced over to Darkpaw. He was sitting in the back. His ears were flattened and his head low. Fallenstar gulped. How should i put this… “Well,” she mewed “We have had several signs of him lately, and Ashpaw claims he smelled his scent in camp.” She saw Darkpaw cringe. Ashpaw swung his head in his direction, giving him a stern glare. “I will be sending out night patrols,” meowed Feathertail, her tail lashing. Fallenstar nodded. “If anyone is to see him it must be reported immediately, and the night patrols will start at moonhigh,” she said. She glanced over to Darkpaw again, only to see him mutter something under his breath and turn away.
Chapter 8
Gee… I have to be more careful if I still want to train… Thought Darkpaw. Fallenstar has figured me out and its all dumb Ashpaw’s fault. I just want to be a better warrior like Moonshade promised, is that a crime? As Darkpaw hopped over Ashpaw and out of the den, he noticed Blizzardtail was up and about. I should take a different way out of camp if I dont want to be noticed. He snuck back into the den and settled back down into his nest. Brokentail will have to wait a bit. He pretended to fall asleep as Blizzardtail walked past, carrying some herbs. Smells bitter, blegh. As soon as she passed, he slipped through a gap in the den wall, and walked out onto the marsh. He crossed the border into the forest, and crept through the thornbush into the clearing. “Sorry I’m late,” he meowed hastily. “What will we be working with today?” he asked. “You will be having an assessment ,” meowed Moonshade. “So far its not off to a great start. He’s late already!” growled Brokentail. Moonshade whipped around to face Brokentail and met him with a razor sharp glare. “Anyways,” she lashed her tail. “You will be tested today on reflexes, skills and strength,” she meowed. Darkpaw nodded slowly. “Okay,” he mewed softly, sounding like a kit. What if I don’t do well? What will happen to me then? He quickly shook his head. He didn’t want to think about those kinds of things just yet. “Shall we start?” meowed an unfamiliar voice. Darkpaw blinked to realized he was dazing. Suddenly, he realized there was another cat in the clearing. “Whose this?” he asked. “Falconscreech,” replied Moonshade. “You will be tested by her,” she added. Darkpaw nodded. “I’m ready!” Falconscreech nodded. “Let’s begin!”
PART 9
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Ashpaw crouched down next to Blackfire, Mistheart, Daisyleaf and Nightclaw. “I’m going up ahead,” he meowed. Mistheart nodded. “Okay, Nightclaw Blackfire and I are going to check the south border. Daisyleaf, you stay with Ashpaw.” said Mistheart as they padded off. “Oh. I think I can go alone, I’ll be fine...” meowed Ashpaw “Are you sure?” asked Daisyleaf. He nodded. “Positive,” he said. “Ok, whatever you say, Ashpaw!” Daisyleaf meowed. “Bye!” meowed Ashpaw as they walked off. “Bye! Meet you back at camp at Moonhigh!” Ashpaw looked around the marshy area. Seems to be nothing here… lets just double check and then head off to the forest. He wandered over to the border and sniffed it, only to smell the familiar scent of Darkpaw. Oh BOY I really WONDER what he is doing! he thought to himself sarcastically. He popped his head out from the bush he was sitting in, just to see Darkpaw, Brokentail and…. who are THEY? Brokentail was off to the side, resting next to a willow tree. Alongside him was a black she cat with greyish blue splotches and farther off Darkpaw grappled with a red-and-brown streaked she cat. “Give up Darkpaw!” she spat “You know you cant beat me, you’ve tried!” “Never Falconscreech!” he yowled “Your taunts mean nothing to me! I know you're just trying to distract me!” he slashed at the she cats face, sending scarlet droplets everywhere. She let out a screech and leaped up to rake her claws down his spine. Ashpaw’s eyes widened in fear. Does he do this every night? Darkpaw reared up on two legs, leaped, then landed on Falconscreech's back, biting her neck. She collapsed, and Darkpaw stepped back. “Very good,” she meowed to him. “He can always improve though,” Brokentail pointed out. Moonshade nodded. “You have passed the assessment though. Congratulations,” said Moonshade. “Welcome to the team.” meowed Brokentail. “You’ve earned it.”Ashpaw squeezed his head back into the bush, wincing as his ear got caught on a thorn. He struggled back into place, then froze as he heard voices “Did you hear that?” whispered Brokentail. Darkpaw sniffed the air. “Why, Its Ashpaw!” he exclaimed. “Who?” snarled Falconscreech, wrinkling her nose. “He is my denmate,” Gulped Darkpaw. Brokentail opened his jaws to taste the air again. “It seems he’s here alone,” he meowed. Moonshade lashed her tail “Kill him,” she hissed. Darkpaw’s eyes widened “I-” he began. Moonshade unsheathed her claws and crept them along Darkpaw’s spine. “We can't have any witnesses,” she meowed. “But… he..” Ashpaw ran, Falconscreech’s blood dripping off his pelt and the voices behind him no more than a blur. “I don’t want to be killed, but I need to tell Fallenstar!” he said out loud. He didn’t care about Darkpaw’s trust anymore, he had to do what was right for his clan. He ran into thornbushes, tripped on brambles, stumbled in rabbit holes, but Ashpaw just kept running. Soon the rest of the patrol caught up. “What’s happening?” panicly exclaimed Blackfire. “No time to explain!” he meowed quickly. “Fallenstar, Feathertail! I have news!”
And finally, Part 10!
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“Really?” Feathertail asked. “I’d thought I smelled something suspicious when I found you in that clearing alone that one night.” Ashpaw noded “He was with three other cats too and they were training, but with claws!” He caught his breath and continued on. By the end, Feathertail and Fallenstar were wide eyed with shock. “We didn’t know about ALL of this…” whispered Feathertail, eyes streatched so far that she looked like an owl. Fallenstar stared at Ashpaw. “We have to tell him… Do you think he has already found out?” she asked. I wonder what secrets Darkpaw could be keeping from us… What could he be planning?
=^.^= Whoa. Your Warrior Cats fanfic is so epic! Lol, I don't know if it's intended or not, but your cat characters remind me of cats from the actual series.
DeleteFallenstar: a female Firestar -TC
Brokentail: Brokentail(star) - SC
Darkpaw: Lionpaw (Lionblaze) -TC
Ashpaw: a male Cinderpaw (Cinderheart) Cinderheart and Ashpaw's legs healed; Cinderpelt's didn't -TC/TC
Moonshade or Falconscreech: Mapleshade -TC & RC ?
Nina lorene what is your username?
ReplyDeleteMine is twinkleninja, I was wondering if we could be buddies?
Thank you,
~Twinkleninja~
Hey Snowy, do you think you could help me on my mailtime? And to anyone on this can you guys help?? My username is olivia111800
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