"Watch this", she said, sprinting toward another blood monkey. Leaping into the air, she sliced it with the sword she carried in her jaws.
"....impressive", Dalia said to her in a plain, sarcastic tone. Simone trotted towards a blood monkey, slipping and falling into a mud puddle as it swung it's fist at him in fury.
Nali slowly clapped her paws together, "woohoo, nice job.." She said mockingly.
"LISTEN UP EVERYONE" The elder wolf howled, as the crowd's (who had been watching the current volunteers train from the sidelines) eyes darted to him.
"STEP FORWARD, IF YOU CARE TO VOLUNTEER!". A small bunny stepped out from behind a lazy looking arctic wolf. She was dressed in a mint green mech helmet, green bow, silver spiked collar, and green elf bracelets.
CHARACTER BY VIRIDESCENTFUTURE. CONGRATS ^.^ |
"Well, look what we have here" Nali said, chuckling from the corner.
"My name is Lara Littlebunny" the bunny said.
"Why don't you come and show off your skills, Lara. We do not accept EVERYONE." The elder wolf ordered. Without saying a word, Lara readily stepped up to one of the targets, her bow in her paws. She aimed carefully, releasing the arrow. It hit the bulls-eye, and the crowd sheered and howled, some booed.
"Very well done. That was.... unexpected." The elder wolf said in surprise.
"Thank you" Lara replied happily.
"Go join the others in the corner, Littlebunny. You are to participate in the journey".
"Welcome to the team" Simone said to Lara with a welcoming smile.
"Thanks. What is your name?" Lara asked.
"Simone". He answered her.
"Nice to meet you."
"You too". He ended the conversation.
"ANYONE ELSE? ANYONE?" The elder wolf called. A large wolf with an orange headdress, silver bow, white bone tail, and phoenix leg armor walked proudly towards the elder wolf.
CHARACTER BY WILDWOLFPRINCESS. CONGRATTIES :) |
"Nakini".
"Well, Nakini. Now you must prove yourself. Kill that blood monkey!"
Nakini charged the blood monkey, clashing it's belly with the sharp claws on her armor, and biting it's neck to end it completely.
"You have some skills, Nakini. You have been accepted" He said to her with a gesture towards the corner. Nakini walked over to the others and sat beside Nali.
"Oh, hi. Nice job out there, though I could of done better".
"Well, your clearly very arrogant". Nakini said to Nali, not interested in talking to such an animal like her.
"I agree, you ARE arrogant". Dalia said.
Lara and Simone stayed silent, not quite sure what to say.
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Well, that is all for today (I'm in a bit of a hurry, sorry!!). Entries are now closed, but if you already submitted a character and it was not featured, don't worry just yet! You still have a chance to be part of the story next week.
I love the outfits
ReplyDeletei love it.
ReplyDeletePretty :3 I love mech angel helmets on bunnies lol
ReplyDeleteKewl!
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU SO MUCH ARTHOP! You won't BELIEVE how happy I am to have my animal featured. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteaww :)
ReplyDeleteFifth Comment! Great post, Arthop! I love how you do the FF's now I hope you continue to do them this way! ~koalasrock55082 AJ
ReplyDeleteI love it!! :D It's like an actual GOOD fanfic that's aj themed. Keep it up please! ^-^
ReplyDeleteBunnehoverandout
:3
ReplyDeleteOkie, the new item is the Mechanical Picture in Jam Mart Furniture, that comes in 5 colours (but I probably missed some XD) and the giveaway winner HAS BEEN ANNOUNCED on my blog!
ReplyDeleteLink > http://animaljamprism.blogspot.ca/
Did ya win! Congrats to the winners, and congrats if you didn't win; I'll be holding more giveaways in the future!
Heh, guess who won the giveaway? ^^
ReplyDeleteAlso, I agree with you, these new FFs are fantastic! Get it? FF stands for Fantastic Four in the Marvel Comics, and it's fantastic? No... Okay.
ReplyDeleteHello there!
ReplyDeleteHi :3 How You Been? You Seem Really, Sweet :)
ReplyDeleteI submitted my characters, Daredevil Arcticbrave (the tough one) and Princess Arcticspirit (the ordinary one). I hope you saw that.
ReplyDeleteUH NO I'M BEING BURNED TO DEATH
ReplyDeleteI love that dragon though xD
XD
ReplyDelete*shriek.
ReplyDeleteAlso, when did stories on the Animal Jam Spirit get so violent and unsettling? Remember, the blog is also read by young children who may "shriek" at the description of "blood" and the word "kill".
A trigger warning could have been helpful next time. Though, if you ask me, all stories posted should be blog appropriate.
True... I never thought of that.
ReplyDeleteOkkkkaaayy, so after what seemed like years of pain-staking preparation, endless drawing and adding minuscule little details, I managed to make another image of my arctic wolf, this time, with no looking at other drawings! Yay!
ReplyDeleteIt took me an UNBELIEVABLY long time to draw this, I think I'll send it to Spirit Art. :3
The head's a bit weird, but oh well. XD
The spikes on the collar look like carrots XD
ReplyDeleteYou can definitely draw better than I can
ReplyDeleteIs this about the photo that I poster? If so, I'm sorry. I wasn't aware that people were uncomfortable with those words. If so, I will delete my previous comment.
ReplyDeleteThat's AMAZING!!!! Whenever I try to do drawings like that, I end up making what looks like a demented hippo. You're really good, do some more!
ReplyDeleteYour being way too over-dramatic about it. It isn't like I went all into detail, for example: "Dalia effortlessly struck the monkey in the neck, as blood gushed out. It fell to the ground, a pool of blood surrounding it. Dalia was proud of her kill. She walked away, the dirt sticking to her blood soaked paw". Yea, I could of went even more into detail then that ^^ but did I? No. Those words aren't going to kill someone or make somebody "shriek". If they did shriek obviously they haven't ever listened to the news and haven't been exposed to society. Have you ever read the role-play comments?
ReplyDeleteI've read young children's novels twice as violent as this.
And if you don't mind, don't reply to my comment. I don't want this turning into an ongoing argument. Thanks ^.^
I agree, this is REALLY good :o
ReplyDeletexD
ReplyDeleteSorry if this was offensive ;u;
ReplyDeletemaybe you should make fashion fridays less rare. nearly all fashion animals i see have spikes. besides not everybody have rares.
thank you!
i won yeee
ReplyDelete( never wins nuthin' )
* currently sitting with a mechanical dragon in the top tower in a crystal palace where she is sitting on an ice couch and there is a tv and fire place and a pillow nest * YEP PREFECTLY NORMAL NOTHIN WEIRD HERE I MEAN DRAGONS TOTALLY WATCH REHAB ADDICT XD
ReplyDeleteNice ;o
ReplyDeletei just like sharp objects....
ReplyDeleteWHY NOT PUT ONE AROUND MY CHARACTERS NECK :3
O.O
ReplyDeleteThat's not creepy...
ReplyDeleteplaying with pizap
ReplyDeleteLET IT GOOOOOO I DONT CARE ANYMOREEE
I love that show!
ReplyDeleteI do not like the new comment system it makes it hard to comment.
ReplyDeleteI have a nm couch trick :O
ReplyDeleteJust put two wood lawn chair together and put mats on it
yeh
ReplyDeleteIm happy there'll be a next one :D
ReplyDeleteI'm bad at editing :U
ReplyDeleteme too
ReplyDeleteThank you!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
ReplyDelete*pulls out a box featuring an array of daggers and knives*
ReplyDeleteWho first? *maniacal laughing ensues*
I wish I could edit. I can draw, I can write, but editing? You do not want to see my bloated 'pictures'.
ReplyDeleteNice! x3 Better than what I could do, although I'm beginning to see the constant pattern of glitzy, glittery backgrounds.
ReplyDeleteShould I feel bad that I don't find the example disturbing in anyway....
ReplyDeleteAnyone on AJ?
ReplyDelete:0 Nice trick, I'll totally do that in the future.
ReplyDelete*pats my dragon on its head while it watches Animal Jam Idol*
ReplyDeleteThat would be the ultimate defense again people trying to slice chu.
ReplyDeleteEDIT POWER!
ReplyDeleteNeat
ReplyDeleteCool! How did you make that?
ReplyDeleteNo, not at all
ReplyDeleteEpic!!! SO EPIC! How do you get an animal in the story again? Your e-mail???
ReplyDeleteNot at all, Arthop, I LOVE IT! Your editing is probably better than mine!
ReplyDeleteOhh, COOL!
ReplyDeleteSO EPIC! How DO you make these banners???
ReplyDeleteI like it!!! My COMPUTER drawing sucks, but my PENCIL drawings are pretty good! wish it was same for computers... :(
ReplyDeletehttps://imgflip.com/gif/lklkq
ReplyDeletehttps://imgflip.com/gif/lklkq
ReplyDeleteVERY FUNNY!
anyone here?
ReplyDeleteIt was kind of too violet, this is not what Fashion Fridays are about. I agree with Ronen, maybe a warning would of been nice, and little kids might read this blog and won't shriek at it but might be a little disturbed
ReplyDeleteWow! Noice!
ReplyDeleteHey, guys.... well, here's the thing...
ReplyDeleteLast time I really enjoyed the story form...but this time it was horrid. Sorry! There were too many spelling errors and grammar mistakes, and the story didn't make much sense :T and blood monkeys... what? And the characters have odd names, so yeah.
But nice outfits. The outfits are great!
Get the outfit and then wander up your Beach House shore and add a special effect.
ReplyDeleteGreat! So happy for NMs seeing this <3
ReplyDeleteWut. Wut. Wut. Not da words
ReplyDeleteIdk how people are doing it
ReplyDeleteYES EXACTLY SO SO TRUE
ReplyDeleteJEEZ PEOPLE HAVE OPINIONS. DO YOU MIND? THIS POST WAS SORTA..... inappropriate
ReplyDeleteDEFINITELY!
ReplyDeleteNah
ReplyDeleteHEY GUYS! IT'S GEMMAROCKS AGAIN!
ReplyDeleteJust wanna say, if anybody wants anything under 5,000 gems they can have it. All you gotta do is:
1) Name your username
2) Name your item you want
3) Name the colour
4) Name where it is sold, price details, etc.
And 1) non-members put unwanted items no trade 2) members can be gifted the item!
Thanks!
cool post
ReplyDeletewh
ReplyDeleteNUU TAIL WHY DID THAT STUPID CRUSTLE USE A ROCK MOVE ON YOU CRI :(
ReplyDeleteUh
ReplyDelete:Glances at all the stuff I've said over the past month:
Oops
XD I had to do this all on computer, and not even with a mouse! It's just patience that makes it good. Patience and lots of candy.
ReplyDeleteGood.
ReplyDeleteUsername: Saphire0808
ReplyDeleteItem: Fancy Vanity
Colour: Can't change colour
Details: Epic Wonders, 3000 gems
Member
:D
ReplyDeletego to pizap
ReplyDeletecut out your animal
i was bored and i was watching Harry Potter so i named my character after Voldemort's snake...
ReplyDeletei really liked it....
ReplyDeletechildrens books these days are worse...
Take the Hunger Games for example....
CHILDREN ARE KILLING OTHER CHILDREN
death is a part of life...
ReplyDeleteyup totally not creepy
ReplyDeleteThat's nice of you :D! I would ask for a rare tuetue, but there not in stores. XD.
ReplyDeleteAhh, a little late XD I did have one actually but I sent it
ReplyDeleteNot everyone reads those :T
ReplyDeleteKayyyyyyy
ReplyDeleteYAAAY GO LARA AND DALIA!!!
ReplyDeleteI'm totally rooting for Dalia and Lara here. Nali is soooo mean!!
I guess Nakini and Simone are ok. Simone seems a bit stuck up tho.
It's one thing to say someone died. It's another thing to describe how.
ReplyDeleteBut some children are too young to understand what goes on in the news. This blog should be child-friendly. The last thing Snowyclaw needs on top of all her schoolwork and busy life are complaints from parents using the words "kill" and "blood" inappropriately. Young children often mimic what others do, so if they read something that uses words in an inappropriate way, they might start saying them to people in inappropriate ways.
ReplyDeleteAlso, looking out for the safety of others on the blog is never a sign of being "over-dramatic".
The Hunger Games is a young adult book, not a children's book.
ReplyDeleteOoh especially I like the bunny outfit. Also the wolf one is cool too!
ReplyDeletethere are VIOLENT books, such as warriors, cats killing other cats....
ReplyDeleteand warriors is an EXREMELY populare series...
many kids will be exposed to abuse and all other sorts of stuff...
ReplyDeletedeath isnt a bad thing either..
kids read books like that though
ReplyDeleteActually its nagini, not nakini, btw still nice outfit
ReplyDeleteI also couldn't hear the movie cause I was playing aj
ReplyDeleteI heard nakini sooooo yeah
1) puppyfalina
ReplyDelete2) Mechanical dragon
3) Pink
4) Jam mart furniture, 750 gems
Actually, I read it when I was ten.
ReplyDeleteOh alright, see you there.
ReplyDeleteYeah well, what's so great, why does everyone suddenly like warriors instead of survivors!
ReplyDeleteits ok it doesnt really matter anyway, still nakini is still a cool name
ReplyDeleteermigerd i need to know wat happens next its so friken interesting!
ReplyDeletewell nakini stood up for herself when this b***h Nali told her that she could do better, So Nakini seems pretty strong and brave
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